Loved You First (A Louis Tomlinson And Harry Styles Fanfic)

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Ally has been best friends with Louis Tomlinson since they were babies. They spent everyday together until Louis moved to England to do x-factor. It's been three years since they've seen each other. They still kept in touch over the phone but they never seen each other since Louis left. One day Ally wakes up and finds out shes moving to England. Once she reunites with Louis, she meets the other boys from One Direction. Louis has always loved Ally and still does but he always kept it to himself. When he's about to tell Ally how he feels..his best mate, Harry asks her to be his girlfriend and Ally says yes. This caused nothing but trouble. Who will Ally choose? Louis or Harry?


13. Adventure With Louis

(Ally's POV)

    After a few seconds, Louis opened the door. "Welcome back!'' he said hugging me once Harry and I walked in. ''Did you guys have fun?" he asked. I looked over Harry and he winked at me. "Yeah we did,'' I smiled. "That's good! But we're going to have more fun finding our secret hangout,'' Louis said like a little kid. ''Maybe,'' I laughed. "I'm going to go get ready! I wont be long,'' he smiled and ran back upstairs. Harry and I walked over to the couch and sat next to each other. He put his arm around me as I leaned on him. "Baaabeee you have no idea how much I wanted us to be together,'' he said. I looked up at him and said,''You only known me for like a day." "Yeah but the moment I saw you I fell in love. I never felt this way before about anybody. Ally you're special to me. I love you,'' Harry replied and kissed me on the forehead. My blush attack decided to make another trip back. Once we heard footsteps, Harry ran to sit on the other couch. We didnt want Louis finding out yet. Or anyone.

  "Ready to go,'' an excited Louis asked. I nodded and got up. "Bye Harry, we'll be back soon,'' I said and walked out the door with Louis. We got in the car as my phone buzzed.

From Harry<3-

 Baaaabeeeeee we have a problem.:(

To Harry<3-

 What is it Harry?

From Harry<3-

 I miss youuu :( <3 xx

To Harry<3-

Haha, dont worry it wont be long:) xx

With that I put my phone away. "So got any ideas for our place to be?" Louis asked driving. "How about another tree house?" I suggested. "Sounds great! I know where one is,'' he replied. Before Louis was famous, we had a secret tree house that we went to everyday for an hour. We had it since we were in third grade and it was decorated as our own little space. I took out my phone and started playing the song,'Look After You', by the Fray. Without knowing it, I was singing along.

 "Ally you have a beautiful voice,'' Louis said snapping me out of my own world. I got embrassed and asked, ''No I dont! Sorry you had to hear that." "Ally I'm serious. You got talent. You're voice is beautiful like you,'' he said smiling over at me. I blushed and smiled down at my phone. I felt him still looking. "Louis, unless you want to die in a car crash, I suggest you keep your eyes on the road," I said. "Not my fault you're beautiful,'' he laughed concentrating on the road. This reminded me of early with Harry. ''You're not bad yourself,'' I admitted. ''Well look at me. I'm irresistable,'' he joked.

  I turned off the music and decided to catch up on things with Louis. "So what have you been up to lately?" I asked. "Oh you know. Just in a band,'' he said as if it was a normal thing. "Are you guys on break or something?"I questioned. "Yeah for like a month. Next month we're going to America for some concerts,'' he answered. Nooooo. I never thought that dating Harry meant a long distance relationship. I chose not to stress about it at the moment.

  Louis parked  near a group of trees and we got out the car. I noticed there were a few paparazzi's taking pictures of us just like earlier when I was with Harry. Wow these boys never got privacy no matter where they were. ''We're here love,'' he said putting his arm around me. He called me love. Could he have feelings for me? Nah, Louis always called me nice things. I looked up in one of the trees with a ladder and saw a tree house. "You first,'' he said. I climbed up the ladder as he followed and went into the empty tree house. "We need to bring this place to life,'' I said looking around. "Got that right. For now lets see what we can do with a sharpie,'' he smiled taking out two black sharpies and handing me one.

  In bubble letters I wrote , "Property of Ally And Louis''. I looked at what Louis wrote and he wrote 'Ally+LouisForever<3'. I smiled and walked over to him. I hugged him as he gave me a quick kiss on the cheek. I realeased of the hug and looked into his breathtaking eyes as he looked into mine.


  No Ally. Snap out of it. I know you have feelings for Louis but dont increase them. You just started dating Harry! Harry loves you. Louis doesnt. Hes just being nice. If he loved you he wouldve told you ages ago.

  After we wrote some of our inside jokes we decided to head back to the car. Once we got in Louis said, "We need to come here again and add up pictures and stuff like that.'' "We sure do,'' I smiled at him. "I had a great time,'' I said reaching over to hug him. ''Me too Ally,'' he blushed and started driving. We turned on the radio and started singing to One Direction's 'Truly Madly Deeply'. I gotta admit we did sound good together. The song finished as soon as we got into our driveway. "Ally I'm glad your back," he said looking over at me. "That makes us both,'' I smiled back. He leaned in closer but then quickly jerked back. What was that about? Was he about to..No, I'm just thinking things.

(Louis POV)

  I leaned in closer but then pulled back. I really wanted to kiss her and tell her how I felt. But before I could, I knew I should ask Harry for advice. He always knew what to do. I was going to ask him tomorrow.

   When we got back in the house Harry greeted her by picking her up, twirling her around, putting her back down, and a kiss on the cheek. I felt a bit suspiscious. But maybe its just Harry being Harry. "So whats the secret place?" Harry asked. "Its called a secret place for a reason. No ones going to know about it except me and Ally,'' I smirked putting my arm around her. "But Boo Bear," Harry pouted. I shook my head. "No can do Hazza. It's a secret,'' I replied snapping my figure playfully. We all then went to the living room and started watching Ally's favorite cartoon, Scooby Doo.

   Anyways, I had a great time with Ally. Spending time with her today made it feel as if she never left. It made me love her more and it just made me want to stay with her all day long. Just us two. She made me feel special. I never had a girlfriend before because no girl would ever compare to her. I always hid my feelings but I dont think I can any longer. Try loving someone for eight years.  


-Authors Note-

I hope this made up for the short chapter I wrote.

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