My big bro Louis Tomlinson

Hi im Elizabeth Tomlinson and i have a brother named louis tomlinson he is very over protective when i date .~what happens when she falls for one of her brothers best mates while dating a guy.....?will one of them fall for her...?~read to find out(one direction not famous) hope you enjoy:)


5. Mixed feelings :/

*(A/N)hey i been busy this chapter might be small im going to say sorry in advantage.So sorry.Anyways just pretend that jaden smith is 18 in my movella luv you all!!!:)

*Liz POV*

I woke up to the sound of people jumping on my be an saying "WAKE UP WAKE UP ITS TIME TO WAKE UP WAKE UP!!"repeatedly."GUYS LET ME SLEEP!!""No now wake up an make food.""We'll wate for an hour cause im not getting up right now."I said still sleepy."Fine i guess the house is gonna burn down better gather your precious."Louis said with a evil grin."NO NO IM UP NOW GET OUT SO I CAN GET READY!!""ok"Louis said skipping out the door ."Thanks love but ill make something don't worry about it."Harry said with a cheecky smile while closing te door.I always knew he would turn out as a flirt i thought to myself.My phone buzzed and interrupted my thoughts .I had one new message from jaden.


"Hey babe i was wondering if i can come by in alittle to hang out with you and get to know your brothers friends.xx"


"Sure babe and i think you'll love them they are real nice.xx"

After i got ready and showered and put on some dark jeans and a free hug shirt i put my hair up in a pony tail and curled it and i put on some black converse to top it off.*BUZZ BUZZ*


"Im sure there friendly ill be there in an hour or so after that i wanna take you to the"


"sure and I'd love to go to the park with you see you later luv yazz.xxxx"2minutes later 


"Kay see you then luv you to.cxxx"

After our convo.i decided to go downstairs and to my suprise there was 5 boys sitting quietly on the coach and i decided to go and eat some cereal even though Harry made eggs and pancakes i wasnt in the mood to eat that.They haven't noticed me so i decide to scare them.Louis Liam and Harry were sitting on a couch together so i was gonna scare 3 boys."AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!" I screamed as i poked Liam and Harry since they were on the ends ."AHHHHHHHHHH!!!" I heard 5 boys scream ."Hahah how did I scare you 2 u didnt even touch you 2 " i said between laughs ."WE'RE GONNA GET YOU BACK SO BAD ELIZABETH IF ITS THE LAST THING I DO!!!"Louis and Harry screamed ."Ok sure oh an by the way Jaden is coming by and hes gonna hang out and then im gonna go to the park wi-"i was cut off by Harry and Liam picking me up and taking me outside."NO NO NO PLZ GUYS I WILL DO ANYTHING YOU GUYS SAY FOR A WHOLE WEEK I PROMISE I WONT SCARE YOU GUYS EVER AGAIN I HAVE A DATE JUST PLZZZ!!"i screamed and pleaded them.they stoppe what they were doing and put me down.Harry and Liam laye down beside me ."Ok love but just remeber what you said."Harry said with a cheecky smile i think im staring to fall with him but I have a boyfriend for crying out loud i don't know waht to do.

*Harry POV*

"Ok love but remember what you said ." I said with a cheecky grin.By tht i meant if i ever asked her out she better agree or atleast say yes .I liked her so much but i knew that she had a boyfriend and shouldn't have feelings for her what's so ever but she s just so beautiful.I did get jealous when she said that she had a date with him.I just hope at the end she will have her prince and by that i mean me.

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