She's too young - completed

This is a story I wrote for a fan, Ellie. I'm so sorry I haven't posted it, it's been waay crazy. So anywho, this is a fanfic about Louis Tomlinson. They fall head over heels in love, but will it work? People will cry. Feelings will die. And the world will continue to tell them, "She's too young..."


13. Watch out

After the kiss Louis and I shared last night, he lead me back to the bunny. Ashes were settling through the thin air, and warmth was radiating on the cool sky. Everyone held hands with one another. As Louis did the same to me, he locked our fingers together and leaned down to plant a soft kiss on my cheek.


I layed in bed, not able to sleep through the night. Still hard to fathom the fact that Louis kissed me hours ago. And I kissed him back. It felt right, and I liked the unfamiliar feeling very much. But, something in the back of my mind told me to watch out.



"You're dating my brother?" Daisy smiled, sitting down with me on the ledge the following day. The usual spot where Summer and I would sit during lunch. She was nowhere to be found though.


I crunched my eyebrows, not really knowing the answer to her question. "I don't know honestly. He kissed me."


"He wouldn't stop talking about you last night, after we got home from my cousin Jessica's house." She exclaimed, making complete sense. Their cousin. Duh. Wait he was talking about me? I guess Daisy noticed my shocked facial expression, she giggled,


"Yes he was talking about you all night long." She dragged out the last part.


I shrugged my shoulders and blushed, but was shot down by her next words.


"But watch your back okay?" Her face dropped, to concern.


"W-why?" I stuttered.


"Louis is almost nineteen, you're only fourteen. You're way to young for him and people aren't going to like it." Daisy crossed her fingers together.


"Well yeah but I'm going to be fifteen next month. That'll be okay, right?"


"I don't know, but Louis' past girlfriends aren't going to take a liking to the fact that he's moved on. Let alone moved on to a girl four years younger than him. Or as people call us, 'freshmeat'"


I stood their long after the bell rang registering in confusion, 'I need to watch my back.'

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