She's too young - completed

This is a story I wrote for a fan, Ellie. I'm so sorry I haven't posted it, it's been waay crazy. So anywho, this is a fanfic about Louis Tomlinson. They fall head over heels in love, but will it work? People will cry. Feelings will die. And the world will continue to tell them, "She's too young..."


15. Twenty questions

Louis had offered to walk me to my car, but I turned him down. If mom seen us together she'd run him over a gazillion times. Or obviously she might've 'ripped his manhood off with her bare hands.' Oh.


My sisters had a recital to attend, mom and dad went with them. Shocking they'd actually stand within a mile radius in the same area together. I stayed behind though, there really wasn't a need to take two vehicles to a small ballet performance. The house was lonley, boring and silent. Playing pandora and hanging upside down from my bed wasn't really setting the record for best night ever. All my blood rushed to my head so I sat up quickly feeling dizzy and stupid. I sighed aloud rubbing my temples to cool down like I usually did whenever I overheated or became stressed out. My phone had stayed silent and unused for the whole day. No texts. No calls. The life of a loner. Well I wouldn't actually call my self a loner, I'd more prefer 'only acompanied by one friend in my whole life who now turned into a mean bitch and doesn't care about anyone else so I live the life of swinging the wrong side on my bed until I practically faint' type of girl. Yes. More like it.


Anywho, speaking of phones. I wondered if I'd text Louis I would seem to clingy or all over him.

Should I text him? Should I not? I don't kn-




My phone went off, rattling on my nightstand beside me. A call. Speak of the devil,


"Hello?" I attempted to sound casual.


"Hi Ellie, it's Lou." His voice sounded through the other end. His sweet, beautiful voice.


oh my god Louis Tomlinson is on the phone with me right now holy crap what is life. play it cool Ellie play it cool.


"Oh hi Louis, what's up?"


"Nothing really, what are you doing?"


"Being bored, home alone." Wait. Did I sound to available?


"same here haha." He chuckled.


"yeah..." awkward, Ellie. Nice move.


"Sooo.." He dragged out his word.


"um.." I did the same.


He coughed, "So Ellie."


"Yes, Louis?" He gave me butterflies again.


"I... I like you a lot." He mumbled.




"R-really?" I questioned, completely shocked for some reason.


"Yeah.. is that okay with you?" I could sense the hesitation or nervousness in his tone.


"Of course it's okay." It was hard to keep the huge smile from my lips.


After a good fifteen minutes of talking about school, dances coming up, and the utter awkwardness I went through on the first day of school that he thought was the funniest thing in the world. It was sort of funny I'd guessed, I should have read the sign. Stupid me.


"Tell me about yourself Ellie." Louis said.


"What do you want to know?"




"I don't know what to say.." I trailed off.


"Okay. Let's make it easier, twenty questions."


"Alright, you ask first." I said finding myself drawn to the subject. Knowing more about Louis really made me wonder who he truly is.


"Favorite colour?" Typical question. Of course he'd ask that.


"mmm, depends on how I'm feeling. Today I'd say pink though." I lay back into my pillows getting more comfy.


Chuckling he replied, "Okay ask me something."


What do I wan't to know about him? I found myself blank at the moment. Eventually I came up with something,


"Favorite food?" Again, typical question.


"Depends on how I'm feeling. Today I'd say cereal." He laughed mocking me.


We sped up the game.


"Okay, Ellie. Favorite song."

"Hmmm, Enchanted by Taylor Swift. Though it's a love hate relationship. You?"

"Look after you, The Fray. Any siblings?"

"Yup all sisters. Middle name?"

"Same here. And my middle name is William. Yours?"

"Nice name, but no comment. What's you're deal with stripes?"

"They apeal to me. What's you'e deal with blushing all the time?"

"It's just my face. And do you really sing?"

"Yes. How did you know?"

"I seen you're facebook. Why are you so picture perfect?"

"Comes naturally. Why are you so cute?"

I blushed to the extreme. The questions went on, and on. He made me laugh, and giggle, and blush some more. But the real feelings came when I asked,


"Why me? Why do you like me, Louis?"


He took a few seconds to answer. I regretted the question instantly. Until he began to speak again, I wasn't sure if I was relieved or upset he hesitated the answer. Or finding the right way to say it.


"Something drew me to the first time I layed eyes on you, You're a beautiful person Ellie. You're beautiful."



sorry this chapter isn't that great. my mom's boyfriend took my phone cause he's a dick. & yeah I don't really have much time on here soo... goodnight guise.

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