She's too young - completed

This is a story I wrote for a fan, Ellie. I'm so sorry I haven't posted it, it's been waay crazy. So anywho, this is a fanfic about Louis Tomlinson. They fall head over heels in love, but will it work? People will cry. Feelings will die. And the world will continue to tell them, "She's too young..."


28. The stars and moon

After telling him not to kiss me, Louis looked down clearly not happy.


"Do you know what they're saying about us, Lou?" I cried, and still shivered from the cold night.


"no.." He replied.


"You haven't seen the texts? They're all over everyone's phones."


"I haven't seen." exclaiming, he noticed my chilliness and pulled off his sweater from soccer, wrapping it around my shoulders.


"It's not good."


"ssshh.." Louis pulled me closer to him, whispering in my ear.


"Just don't listen to those people." He kissed my hair.


"It's hard not to."


"Well I'm here, Ellie. And I don't want you to hurt anymore." Rubbing my arms, I wasn't sure if he did this on purpose, but it deffinatly warmed me up a notch.


"I'm really sorry about your eye." I whispered.


"It's okay. I just snapped earlier, I didn't mean to. But I care about you Ellie.. a lot. And I don't want to be without you."


"You don't have to be without me Louis." I stood on my tiptoes and kissed his nose. He smiled and pulled me down with him so I was sitting on his lap in the grass.


"My mom's going to see." Looking back at the house, I worried.


"No one is going to see. It's the middle of the night." He ran his fingers through my damp hair, smiling. I examined his eye. Not helping but to think I was the reason for that. I care about him and it kills me he had to hurt because of me. It made me want to kiss it better.


I lay back into his shoulder, breathing in his scent, and for a split second forgetting about the rest of the world. Staring into the sky, it brought me back to reality. Life beyond those stars and how they were made, it was so complictated. Much like me. Much like Louis and I.


The law of gravitational force pulls objects together, heating the core of a mass. A mess of more difficult and technicall space wonders, lesser atomic masses, greater atomic masses, explosions of gases. It was all hard. It was all reality. Nothing was simple, my relationship, my life, those stars. I wished everything was easier. More simple to understand. Because right now I had no clue really what anything meant, but I only knew what it all felt like, sad, happy, peaceful, hurting. Difficult. But life.


"At least the moon is shining." Lou whispered in my ear.


"Too bad it's not a happy moon.." I sniffled.


He didn't answer.


"Louis?" I asked.




"You can kiss me now..."

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