She's too young - completed

This is a story I wrote for a fan, Ellie. I'm so sorry I haven't posted it, it's been waay crazy. So anywho, this is a fanfic about Louis Tomlinson. They fall head over heels in love, but will it work? People will cry. Feelings will die. And the world will continue to tell them, "She's too young..."

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23. Being careful

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I KNOW I HAVE A LOT OF AUTHOR'S NOTES BUT WHO CARES. ANYWHO, I AM SO NOT ALOUD TO BE ON HERE RIGHT NOW BECAUSE OF TESTING TOMORROW AND MY MOM WILL KICK MY ASS IF SHE SEES ME SO I HAVE TO HURRY. UM YEAH HERE IT IS. COMMENT WHO YOU THINK IT IS AT THE END OF THIS CHAPTER KAAAAY GOODNIGHT.

 

I sat on my bed watching Louis rummage through my things.

 

"Having fun?" I asked, chuckling.

 

"You have a lot of.. interesting stuff." He ran a finger over my bookcase, almost mimicking what I did in his room.

 

"Yeah. Interesting." I felt him move beside me from the weight shifting on the other side of the bed. Turning away from him, he pulled me close so my back was pressed to his chest.

 

"Are you going to tell me what had you so upset today?" He whispered.

 

"You really don't know?" I rested my head on the pillow, feeling him breathe in and out against me.

 

"I guess not." He replied.

 

"Louis I need to ask you something."

 

"What?"

 

"Do you really want to be with me?" When I asked, his breathing skipped a little.

 

"Why wouldnt I?"

 

"People don't want us to be together, Louis. They are going to try everything in their power to stop us."

 

"How do you know?" He ran his fingers through my hair.

 

"My parents, the whole school and their rumours it's going to kill me. That girl yesterday, I didn't mean to push her, it was an accident and now she's going to get me back. I'm scared. And it's all because we are together people hate the thought." Tears form in my eyes as I explained this to him.

 

"But I want to be with you..." his lips pressed close to my ear.

 

"And so do I."

 

"Don't be scared. It'll be alright." He kissed my cheek.

 

"Okay.." I mumbled.

 

"I just want you to be careful, still. If you're scared, be careful. I don't want you getting hurt. Promise you'll stay out of trouble."

 

"I will, I won't do anything stupid." I turned around and pecked his lips lightly.

 

We had gotten into another heated makeout session, that resulted in him tickling me repeatedly. I squealed and ran away from him, out of the room clenching my cell in my left hand. Down the hall near my sister's bedroom I heard him creak behind the wall.

 

"Lou?" I called out, feeling scared for him to jump out and frighten me. He didn't answer. My phone vibrated in my hand, "Okay Louis I'm on the phone it's not funny anymore!" I shouted before answering the call.

 

"Hello? Oh hi mom I'm feeling a l- OH MY GOD LOUIS STOP THATS NOT COOL!" Louis jumped behind me and gripped my shoulders making me scream at the top of my lungs. I slapped his arm a few times and held a finger to my lips gesturing to shut up. Running into Lily's room and shutting the door, I held the phone back to my ear.

 

"M-mom?" "Ellie tell me this instant do you have a boy in the house? Who's over there?" She yelled on the other end sounding super upset.

 

"what are you talking about mom?" I asked, trying to sound casual.

 

"I heard a boy, and you screamed! Who's over there?"

 

"oh that! I was just watching a scary film. The audio is so real, mom. Sorry to worry you, it just gave me a fright." Sighing, I realized that was a fair lie. Score Ellie.

 

"okay El, but no more horror movies. You know what I told you about those." Her voice calmed, and I really had no clue what she even said about scary movies. Just as long as it got me out of trouble with her.

 

"yup got, I remember I got it mom, love you bye!" I hung up. Lou peaked his head in the door, smirking.

 

"That wasn't funny Louis." I stood up.

 

"But you didn't get caught!" He chuckled as I made my way out of the room.

 

"You suck I swear to god. What about 'being careful'?" Failing to hold back a giggle at his cute face, he new I wasn't seriously mad at him.

 

"You're too cute when you're angry." He grabbed my hand.

 

"Wish I could say the same to you," I laughed and ran downstairs.

 

"Oh no you did not just say that. You have three seconds to hide!" He shouted from the top of the steps.

 

I yelped and hid by the staircase. As soon as he hit the bottom stair, and turned around I went behind him and covered his eyes with my small hands.

 

"hmm, who's this?" he asked rubbing my arms.

 

"Guess.." I whispered in his ear and kissed the corner of his mouth. He smiled and turned around facing me. As he did earlier, he backed me into the wall and kissed me once again. I wasn't sure if this would seem weird or unattractive or not, but I had the urge to so I went for it. When we pulled away slowly, my fingers held the back of his neck and I bit lightly on his bottom lip earning a smile from him. We stared at each other, and he parted his lips to say something but we got interrupted.

 

"well, well, well. What do we have here, Ellie?" A voice sounded from the front door. Oh my god.

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