One Chance

Bre is incredibly excited about starting her Freshman year in High school. I mean with her dating the freshman quarter back and her 3 best friends by her side what could possibly go wrong? Bre's life has its normal ups and downs like any other teenagers but, when she has a strange encounter with one of the totally hot juniors her life spins around. She is introduced to super hottie Liam Payne who saves her in more ways then one could imagine, all she has to do is give him the chance.


66. the surprise

Hey darlings! So sorry I haven't written in a while so I hope you can forgive me with this chapter. Afterall this was the chapter that I first wrote and gave me an idea to write the story in the first place. This is my fav one direction song and my fav chapter so I hope you LOVE it just as much as I do. We got about 3 chapters left! Thanks for bearing with me! I love you ALL! <3

xxx Bre



Bre's P.O.V

The girls and I gathered around the large picnic table that we had outside on the patio and used for barbecues. I sipped my pink lemonade and smiled ear to ear. I looked at all my friends who seemed to mirror my own smile. Especially Priscilla. I was so happy for her. She finally had someone who genuinely cared about her. She had been hurt in the past by a jerk off who I hated from the very beginning. Well that jerk off can have his slutty wench. Priscilla was finally the princess that was rescued from the tower. And this time, it was by the right guy. I was happy for Zayn too, they needed each other almost as much as I needed Liam. My mushy thoughts were soon interrupted by Niall who had dragged one of our barstools outside and set it up in front of my favorite tree on our property. The Japanese Cherry Blossom.


Niall smiled sweetly at all of us but mostly Danielle. As much as I loved Zayn and Priscilla together, I also liked Danielle and Niall together. Niall was immature and Danielle kept him in line because she was the complete opposite of him. Next there was Liss and Harry. What could I even say about them? They were both loud and crazy thats for sure. They were both also immature and childlike. They hated school and just liked to joke around which meant they loved to mess with us but most of all each other. They both had soft sides as well which showed alot when they were together. Then there was Eleanor who I had become quite fond of. She was like the big sister I always wanted. She kept us freshman in line and always gave great advice. Even though I had only met her this year, she was there for me as if we had been best friends forever. She was also very pretty but I think her charming personality made her even more irresistible to everyone. Especially Louie. And then there was me and Liam. Liam was the definition of my fairy tale prince. He was the last thing on my mind before I fell asleep and the first thing I thought of when I woke up. He had saved me numerous times and I couldn't be more grateful. My world revolved around Liam Payne and I couldn't picture my life without him in it. Niall interrupted my thoughts yet again when he placed his guitar on his lap and began to strum a pretty melody. It was only then that I realized they were going to sing a song. Wow I must have blanked out for a while. I mean come on did I really think Niall was going to sit there and play his guitar without anything else? I mean maybe it would be nice for Danielle but Im not sure what the rest of us would get from it. Ahh well I hope they sing something by Maroon 5. I just love me some Adam Levine. We're they even good enough to sing a Maroon 5 song!? I mean I heard Liam sing before and he has a great voice but I wondered how this little weekend band of his actually was. Ah well whatever they sang I was just grateful to be in this moment. And to have such wonderful people in my life. Niall continued playing his guitar until Liam came out from behind my cherry blossom tree and walked out to where Niall was sitting. And then, Liam's incredibly beautiful voice reached my ears. I listened carefully so I could get all the words. 

"Am I asleep, am I awake or somewhere in between. I can't believe that you are here and lying next to me. Or did I dream that we were perfectly entwined,"I watched Liam's soft lips move as he sang. My heart melted with each word he said. I could hear my heart beating rapidly in my chest. 

"Like branches on a tree or twigs caught on a vine," Liam was now right next to Niall and his shinning brown eyes locked with mine. His gaze held me and I felt my gymnast of a stomach flip and turn just like it had the first time I laid eyes on him. Niall began to sing but Liam;'s intense eyes never dropped from me. Niall of course sang his lines from the heart to Danielle. 

"Like all those days and weeks and months I tried to steal a kiss. And all those sleepless nights and daydreams where I pictured this," Niall's sweet voice sang out as he focused his words on Danielle.

I'm just the underdog who finally got the girl. And I am not ashamed to tell it to the world," Niall finished his solo and Liam began singing and swaying with Niall.

"Truly madly deeply I am, foolishly completely fallen and somehow you kicked all my walls in. So baby say you'll always keep me. Truly madly crazy deeply in love with you, in love with you." Liam smiled the cheeky smile that I loved so much and came over to me. He took my hands in his and began to sing to me and only me.

"Should I put coffee and granola on a tray in bed? And wake you up with all the words that I still haven't said. And tender touches just to show you how I feel. Or should I act so cool like it was no big deal?" Liam kissed me quickly and  then resumed his position next to Niall. Zayn then popped put from behind the tree and sang his line to of course, Priscilla.

"Wish I could freeze this moment in a frame and stay like this. I'll put this day back on replay and keep reliving it," Zayn walked over to where Priscilla was sitting and sang to her. 

"Cause heres the tragic truth if you dont feel the same. My heart would fall apart if someone said your name." He returned back to where Niall and Liam were. Harry came out from behind the tree next and began the chorus that they had sung before. 

"And truly madly deeply I am. Foolishly completely fallen. And somehow you kicked all my walls in. So baby say you'll always keep me. Truly Madly crazy deeply in love, with you." they all swayed to the beat and then finally Louie came out from behind the tree; completing there group. He sang beautifully to El who was sitting on the opposite end of the picnic table.

" I hope I'm not a casualty. Hope you won't get up and leave. May not mean that much to you but to me its everything, everything." Louie joined the rest of the boys in the final chorus. They all looked extremely attractive in elegant black suits. It was a complete turn on. I meant he lads always looked good but in suits, they looked irresistible.

"Truly Madly deeply I am. Foolishly completely fallen and somehow you kicked all my walls in. So baby say you'll always keep me. Truly madly crazy deeply in love with you."

"With you"

"In love with you."

"In love in love with you"

"witha you oooohhh."

We all sat there speechless for a second. All of a sudden he boys opened up their button down shirts one at a time. Painted neatly on each of their chests was a letter. Liam slowly unbuttoned his shirt to reveal a purple "P" on his chest. Niall had an "R" painted in green on his chest. Zayn had a red "O," Louie, an orange "M" and Harry, with a huge smile on his face revealed a blue "?" Then the impact of their beautiful song and the question they had asked at the end of their song had hit us and emotion could be heard everywhere. Eleanor was softly crying at her end of the table, Liss and Danielle sighed a heartfelt sigh, Priscilla had tears that wet her long eyelashes. I on the other hand couldn't compose myself. I sprang off the table like a kangaroo and jumped into Liam's awaiting arms. Before I could thank him for the lovely song and accept his invitation to prom, he smashed his lips to mine. I kissed back instantly and wrapped my legs around his waist. he scooped me up and pulled me closer to his bare chest, so close that we could have appeared like one body. It was as if we were trying to remove all the space between us in one sweet embrace. My hands reached for his head and I held his head close to mine. I never wanted to let this moment go. It was like how Zayn said in the song, "wish I could freeze this moment in a frame and stay like this." Liam pulled away and gently placed me on the ground. 

"Sorry its a little late to be asking you to prom but this song took us forever to write," Liam apologized a she caught his breath. "I just wanted to make sure I got all the words right."

"You did," I smiled up at him.

"Welp looks like we have to go dress shopping," Liss exclaimed breaking up the couples and putting us back together as a group. 

"Yes!" El cheered. "I'm driving!" "We are going tomorrow!" El rambled on as Liam pulled me in for one last kiss.  

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