loved you first- a harry styles fan-fict (vampire)

Adriana Madrigal, an 18 year old girl who doesn't have any luck with the guys. But when she gets into a car accident will she find her true love...? what will happen. She will find out dark secrets.

Adriana's parents died in a car accident a year and a half ago but she still misses them and loves her parents with all her heart. Adriana is an only child. she has two cousins that live with her and their names are nevaeh and paula. They are the sisters she never had.

Adriana loves listening to one direction. Her cousin's and her made a plan to go to a 1D concert and hope to get lucky and met the guys. Adriana is a shy, loveing and caring person, if someone gets her mad she will defend herself. Adriana works at starbucks. Well she is on her way for an interview and she hopes she gets the job. She's mexican/puerto rican. She currently lives in California


14. Chapter 13

Hey Readers!!

As you can see I posted another story. Please check it out and let me know what you think.

It's called "Pearl Harbor" and its a 1D version.

Check it out and find out what happens.


They finished singing "So can we come in" Louis says, we let them in and give each of them a hug.

"So... What do you guys want to do now?" I said as the boys entered the house and sat on the couch. (The time was now 8:38.)

"We could do what you girls were doing" Liam suggests

"We were going to paint our nails, but then you guys came.... would any of you boys would like a manicure?" Dani says laughing. Eleanor grabs the nail polish bottle when Dani said if they would like to get there nails done, then walks to Louis

"Or we could just play a game" Louis says trying to get out of getting his nails done.

"What do you guys want to play?" Niall says

"Lets play truth or dare!" Louis yells

"Oh No! not after that one time we played." Eleanor said

"PLEASE!!" Louis yells

"Fine, whats the worst they could say" Paula says

"Oh you don't know what you just got yourself into" Zayn said smirking

"Who wants to go first..." Louis asked looking around the room. We all sat in a circle in the middle of Eleanor's living room. I sat next to Paula, Nevaeh and Dani next to her and on the other side of me Eleanor sat, then Louis and Harry, then Zayn, Niall and then Liam next to Dani. "Ummm... " Louis said looking for his victim then smirked, "Nevaehhhh..." he said dragging out her name.

Nevaeh looked intimidated, she took a deep breath and got ready for the question. "Truth or dare" Louis said smirking.

I'm scared and I'm not the one getting asked.

Nevaeh's POV:

"Who wants to go first...." Louis said looking around in the group.

"Ummm..." he said looking at everyone in the room,

Don't pick me

Don't pick me

His eyes landed on mine


"Neveahhhh..." Louis said dragging out my name.

I took a deep breath ready for the question. "Truth or Dare" he said smirking

'How bad could it be...?' I thought 'Well he's smirking so its not going to be good'

'Don't be a chicken... I got this'

I looked him in the eyes "Dare" A big grin appeared on his face -Gulp- I'm starting to regret it now

He rubbed his hands together and he had an evil stare in his eyes.

"I dare you the cinnamon challenge." Louis said with a big grin on his face.

My eyes went wide and I almost choked on my own spit, and everyone else was just laughing or saying ohhh!.. "Aghh! where is the cinnamon?" I asked El

We all walked to her kitchen, it was a really big and nice kitchen, she walked to one of her drawers and took out a little bottle that had cinnamon in it and she grabbed a spoon from another drawer. I grabbed a glass of water just in case and I went near the sink in case I need to spit it out.

"Do I really have to do this" I whined

"Yes!" Louis said

Everyone was crowded around me and the sink watching me. I grabbed the spoon and poured the cinnamon on it.

I took a deep breath then started moving the spoon to my mouth but my hand was trembling, I opened my mouth and shoved the spoon in my mouth.

I holding it in my mouth for a few minutes, then I tried swallowing the cinnamon and I started choking on it and i spit it out into the sink and grabbed the glass of water and drank the water. Then i started to rinse my mouth in the sink to get the horrible taste out of my mouth. while I was choking on the cinnamon I looked up and I saw Niall recording the whole thing while everyone else was laughing at me.

After getting my mouth cleaned I yelled at Louis "Why did you make me do that!!" I said laughing "You better run!" I yelled and he started running, I gave him a 3 second head start and I started running after him. He ran into the living room and I tackled him to the floor. "Ouuhhh!!" He yelled as he hit the floor. We started laughing and I got off of him. I got off of him and saw Niall recording us again. I ran to Niall to see the video, once I saw it i started laughing because of my reaction.

"Alright, Louis I'll get you next time" I said as we sat on the floor in the same positions we were before "hmm... Liam, truth or dare?" I said smiling, hoping he would pick dare. 

 Liam's POV:

After Nevaeh finished her dare she was looking for someone to pick. "hmm... Liam," Dang it "Truth or dare?"

"Truth" I said not wanting to do a dare. I could tell she wanted me to pick dare

"Aww come on, I was hoping you would pick dare" She said sticking out her tongue "Hmm.. um... What was your most embarrassing moment?" she said smiling.

 "My most embarrassing moment was when we were under the stage and we were on a lift and I pushed Louis and Louis pushed me and then I fell and I split my jeans, from here to here" I said showing them where it ripped, Louis started laughing because he remembered

 "And there was a big whole like this big" I said holding out my hands showing them how big the whole was "Then we went to preform and we were close to the crowd, and everyone could clearly see I split my jeans" I finished telling them and they started laughing and I joined in with them.

 (A/N: the video I used for Liam's embarrassing moment

"Zayn, Truth or dare?" I said

Zayn's POV:

"Dare" I Said

"I dare you to...erm.. to do an impression of someone in this room" Liam said

"Alright, I'm going to do harry" I said

"So basically I'm from Manchester and I use to work in a bakery and now im in one direction" I said in a low but deep voice sounding just like harry's voice.

(A/N: the video i'm using for Zayns impression - skip to 1:19 -

 "Haha that really sounded like him" Paula said. Every one else agreed and they started laughing.

"Alright next person" I said "Hmmm..." I said looking at who hasn't been called on yet. "Paula.... Truth or dare"

Paula's POV:

"Umm..daaa-truth.. Truth!" I said changing my mind

"Alright... Umm.." Zayn said thinking of something, "If you were invisible for the day what would be the first thing you would do?" 

"Aww that's a good one... Hmm.. I Would...go to my neighbors house and ring on the door and when they open i'm going to sneak into there house and then when they see on ones there and they close the door i'm going to turn off/on  the tv and mess with that person" I said 

they started laughing and saying I'm crazy and stuff haha. "Or I will go to the mall and mess with the person looking at the clothes and knock the rack down to make it look like they did it" I said laughing. "Niall, Truth or dare?" 

Niall's POV:

"Niall, truth or dare?" Paula asked

"Dare" I said

She had a big smile on her face "I dare you to put make up on El's face with out looking"

Oh no... that's not going to be good, I started laughing "Where's the make up?" I asked Paula got up and brought the make up and I walked over to Eleanor, She didn't look to excited but it was a dare so she will have to suck it up. 

Paula's put a blind fold on me and I sat in front of El.

I grabbed something out of the box of make up and I felt it trying to figure what it was. "that's a lipstick" Paula said

I felt around to find Eleanor's face and applied the lipstick. I heard some giggling behind me, then Paula started handing me the make up and saying what they were so I can put it on. She handed me this thing you put on the cheeks.. ermm i think its called blush or something. I put the blush on her cheeks, "Here is eye shadow" She said.

Eleanor closed her eyes so I can put it on her eyelids, when I finished Paula took off the blind fold and when I looked at El I started cracking up, Eleanor turned around so everyone else can see and they started laughing. Eleanor got up to go look in a mirror and when she saw herself she screamed then started laughing. "I'm never letting you do my make up ever again" Eleanor said laughing.

Eleanor came back and sat down with a box of make up removal. "Your turn Niall." Paula said

"Oh yeah.... Dani, Truth or dare?" 

Dani's POV: 

"Oh yeah.... Dani, Truth or dare?" Niall said


"I dare you to... Exchange a piece of clothing with someone in this room" Niall said

Well that's not that bad. "Eleanor, lets change tops" I said, We got up and went into the room next to the kitchen to exchange tops.

"Well that was easy" I said laughing "Louis, Truth or dare?" 

Louis POV: 

"Louis, Truth or dare?" Dani said

"DARE!!" I yelled (A/N: The time is now 8:45)

"I dare you to go to the park and sit on a bench and make sure there is someone near so they can hear and see you, well when you sit down start taking to your self to make it look like your talking to someone but there is no one there." Dani said smiling

"Alright! TO THE PARK!!" I shouted getting up and walking towards the door with everyone following behind. The rain stopped like 30 minutes ago so we could leave now.

Us boy's went in one car and the girls went in another car and we drove to the park, It wasn't to far from where El lives it was like a 5 minute drive. We parked the car next to each other and we got out and met by a tree 

There wasn't a lot of kids or people because it just recently rained and because its kinda getting dark out but there was a few. I saw a woman sitting alone at a bench and there was another bench next to her, it was empty. Perfect. that's where I will be sitting. The woman was watching her children play. "Alright there is a woman over there sitting alone" I said pointing in the direction she was. "Go Dani said" Shooing me away

I walked to where she was sitting at. She was a young woman but she looked like she was 28 almost 30. "Good day" I said sitting a few feet away from her

She looked up and smiled "Yes it is." 

She sat to my right so I turned to my left and started talking to the imaginary person next to me."Hey this is Jim, my friend" I said to the woman pointing to nothing 

She just looked at me with a concerned expression  

"Hey Jim, Where do you want to go next?" I said talking to my imaginary friend. I saw from my peripheral's that the woman was looking at me. I pretended to listen to what Jim was saying. "No, we already went there" I said. I stayed quiet again "Lets go play on the swings" I said as I saw the woman was watching her child on the swing. 

I walked to the swings and sat two seats away from her child and started swinging. "Come push me mommy" Her daughter said. She walked over to her daughter and started pushing her. 

"Jim! Push me higher" I said pushing my self faster. The woman was looking at me funny and continued to push her daughter.

"Fine, i'll push you now, stop complaining" I acted like my imaginary friend, Jim wanted me to push him, so I got off the swing and started pushing the swing. "I'm pushing you as high as I can Jim, If I push you higher your going to fall" I said trying not to laugh because the woman was looking at me like I was crazy. 

The woman grabbed her daughter and said it was time to go "Bye lady! It was nice to meet you."

"Ok ill tell her... My friend Jim says bye" I said chuckling because she started to walk faster. As soon as she got in her car, everyone came out from where they were hiding and we started laughing. "Hahaha that was hilarious!" Adri said

"She thought you were a creep" Paula said laughing

"Lets go back home, It's my turn to pick" I said as we walked to the cars.

once we arrived home it was 9 o'clock. 

"I'm going to the bathroom" Harry said once we got in El's house "Don't wait up" 

"Adri... Truth or dare?" I said once we sat in our circle, Dani went to get us all drinks.

Adri gulped once I asked her. hah she probably knows I'll make her do something crazy just like I made Nevaeh do something crazy.

"Darree.." She said not sure If she should of said it. 

Just as I was going to dare her to prank call someone I saw Harry coming out of the bathroom and I got a better idea.

Adri's POV: 

"Adri... Truth or dare?" Louis said once we sat in our circle we were before

Dang it, if I pick dare he's going to make me do something crazy, and if I pick truth he's going to make me say something embarrassing. 


ok.... "Darree.." I  said sounding more like a question. 

"I dare you to kiss the first person that walks in this room" My eyes flew open 

Well no one is going to come though the door we are all her..- Dani isn't here,  Aw man I have to kiss her when she walks through the door.

I saw a shadow In the hallway coming to the living room, well here comes Dani, she is going to be surprised 

Just as they were going to walk in I saw brown curls.

Crap... I forgot about...


Who did Adriana see?? find out next time.

i hope you like it

please comment if i should update again

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