8. The Creature Of Old

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THE DOCTOR: No, Pond. No. Love him, love him so, so much but do not, do not break him again. This is tearing you apart, and I don’t want it to be my fault.

When Harpal’s diseased hand cures itself, The Doctor and the Ponds decide to all go on holiday. Visiting Lucca in Italy turns into a time of terror as messages on walls and howling through the night turns suspicions into Werewolves, and past into present. With the mysterious Monique Bibiana warning them, will this wolf travel in the night and wreak havoc in Florence as Amy battles to protect the Doctor from River’s theory?

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4. No Evil in God's House

 

PART 4

NO EVIL IN GOD’S HOUSE

 

QUEUE OPENING TITLES.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ni9lQnLuiFs

 

CUT TO RORY WALKING THROUGH THE STREETS. MONIQUE APPEARS BEHIND HIM.

 

MONIQUE: Rory?

 

Rory turns, but his expression doesn’t.

 

MONIQUE: Where are you going?

 

RORY: To find answers.

 

MONIQUE: To what?

 

Rory begins walking away.

 

RORY: To who.

 

CUT TO THE TARDIS – THE DOCTOR IS FLYING OUT OF CONTROL.

 

HARPAL: What’s in 1879?

 

THE DOCTOR: Scotland, and the birth of the wolf!

 

HARPAL: The Werewolf?

 

THE DOCTOR: Yes! If you like!

 

THE TARDIS WHIRRS AND LANDS. HARPAL AND THE DOCTOR STEP OUT.

 

THE DOCTOR: Oh.

 

IT IS 1901, AND THEY ARE IN A GRAVEYARD AT NIGHT TIME.

 

HARPAL: Wrong place, wrong time?

 

THE DOCTOR: Yes, and yes.

 

The Doctor turns to the TARDIS.

 

THE DOCTOR: Where I needed to go? Really? What’s so special here? It’s not like-

 

HARPAL: Queen Victoria’s grave!

 

THE DOCTOR: What?

 

HARPAL: Yeah!

 

Harpal shines a torch on the stone, as The Doctor checks his watch.

 

THE DOCTOR: It’s the fourth of February, Windsor. Queen Vic was buried today.

 

HARPAL: I don’t know whether to find this amazing or horrible.

 

The Doctor walks to her grave with Harpal and they look at the stone.

 

THE DOCTOR: One of the most famous women in history. And she knighted me!

 

HARPAL: What?!

 

Suddenly the ground shakes and rumbled.

 

HARPAL: What was that?

 

THE DOCTOR: I don’t know!

 

It happens again, and the stone begins to crack.

 

HARPAL: Doctor?

 

THE DOCTOR: Back to the TARDIS!

 

They run back to the TARDIS and go inside. After a second or two they both poke they’re heads around. Suddenly a clawed hairy hand sticks out of the grave.

 

HARPAL: Oh my God…

 

The hand wriggled and the wolf climbs out of the grave.

 

HARPAL: Is that?

 

THE DOCTOR: A full moon.

 

The wolf gets up and howls at the moon.

 

HARPAL: No. Way.

 

THE DOCTOR: Queen Vic always had a term of lycanthropy. Dormant, but it seems it may have progressed…

 

The Doctor Sonic’s the wolf as it covers the hole with dirt again.

 

HARPAL: It knows what it’s doing…

 

THE DOCTOR: It’s her…

 

The wolf runs away into the distance.

 

THE DOCTOR: I have its DNA in the sonic. We need to get back to Lucca and test if they are the same. Come on!

 

They hurriedly get back into the TARDIS and it dematerialises.

 

CUT TO AMY FOLLOWING RORY’S FOOT PRINTS.

 

AMY: Rory! Rory!

 

She looks to her left and see’s a hand hanging out, blood dripping.

 

AMY: Oh god.

 

She see’s a trail of blood. She follows it…

 

CUT TO RORY OUTSIDE THE CHURCH.

 

RORY: Answers.

 

He walks to the church and lifts the latch, walking inside. The door locks behind him.

 

INSIDE THE CHURCH: THE CHURCH IS SILENT, AND FEW CANDLES ARE LIT. THERE ARE ECHOES OF GASPING.

 

RORY: Hello?

 

A man creeps up behind him, and grabs him.

 

BEGGER: Help me!

 

Rory screams and jumps back. The man is scrawny, wearing a rag, with long white hair and a beard.

 

BEGGER: Help me! Help me, she’s here! She’s inside!

 

RORY: What? Who? The beast!

 

CUT TO AMY WALKING. SHE HEARS THE TARDIS NOISE AND IT MATERIALISES AROUND HER.

 

INSIDE THE TARDIS.

 

AMY: Doctor.

 

THE DOCTOR: Thought we’d give you a lift!

 

HARPAL: We have bad news!

 

AMY: I. Want. Rory. Take me to him now.

 

THE DOCTOR: He’s in the church.

 

Amy looks startled.

 

AMY: Hurry up!

 

THE DOCTOR: Did you talk?

 

AMY: No.

 

THEY LAND. AMY RUNS OUT THE DOOR TO FIND HERSELF IN THE CHURCH. SHE JUMPS AS SHE SEE’S THE BEGGER MAN STARING AT HER, AGHAST. THE DOCTOR AND HARPAL POUR OUT OF THE DOOR.

 

THE DOCTOR: Ah, hello! Your home is the church! Good. A church should be a home to everyone.

 

HARPAL: Hi.

 

AMY: Hi Rory.

 

BEGGER: What is this trickery? What is it!

 

THE DOCTOR: Well-

 

Suddenly, they hear rasping, and dragged heals on the floor.

 

AMY: Doctor?

 

They see a figure coming out of the shadows.

 

THE DOCTOR: Hello again.

 

Queen Victoria comes into view. Her eyes are totally dark, her hair grey and matted. Her skin is veiny and her eyes are a bright yellow. She looks malnourished and she breathes heavily.

 

BEGGER: The beast! The monster!

 

AMY: Oh my God.

 

RORY: Is that-

 

THE DOCTOR: Not quite.

 

The Doctor steps forward toward her.

 

VICTORIA: You. Are the… Doctor.

 

THE DOCTOR: Yes. We met in 1879 remember? And briefly in 1901.

 

The Doctor scans her with the sonic.

 

HARPAL: She’s the wolf?

 

THE DOCTOR: Yes. The Werewolf. We saw you climb out of your grave on the night you were buried as the wolf. Tell me everything.

 

She screams.

 

VICTORIA: I am cursed!

 

THE DOCTOR: With lycanthropy. Where that first wolf bit you. When I was number ten.

 

VICTORIA: Every full moon I turned, and so one day I poisoned myself, hoping I would die. I only slept for longer, and when I awoke in that coffin, I knew I had to escape. I left dead and blood, then escaped over sea’s to Italy. The shadows, the buildings. I could easily hide.

 

She screams again.

 

AMY: Doctor is she going to-

 

VICTORIA: I have been cursed by that day, because of you, Doctor.

 

THE DOCTOR: Technically not…

 

She throws her head back and screams, and it turns into a roar. She begins to transform and everybody runs back. She continuously roars.

 

AMY: Rory!

 

They embrace and hold tight as they watch.

 

Her skin grows hair and her face twists.

 

THE DOCTOR: I never thought I would get to see it again!

 

HARPAL: Shut up Doctor!

 

 

The beggar runs forward with his arms outstretched.

 

BEGGER: No evil shall reign in Gods house!

 

Victoria throws him away with her now clawed hands, and roars, revealing herself as the full Wolf.

 

AMY: I love you Rory!

 

HARPAL: Doctor plan!

 

THE DOCTOR: I don’t know!

 

The Werewolf charges toward them…

 

QUEUE ENDING THEME AND TITLES.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ni9lQnLuiFs

 

NEXT TIME...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HARPAL: It’s a wolf, how do we kill it?

 

THE DOCTOR: If we don’t she will rule the dark streets at night!

 

CUT TO AMY AND RORY.

 

AMY: Rory, if we die tonight, I love you!

 

RORY: It wouldn’t be the first time!

 

CUT TO MONIQUE AND RORY.

 

MONIQUE: I have been the only one who knows the of the creature. Please help me!

 

CUT TO THE DOCTOR:

 

THE DOCTOR: They were the same DNA! If she bites one of us we will be infected.

 

HARPAL: Imagine if you could get hold of that!

 

THE DOCTOR: This isn’t just a stray wolf anymore. This could be in the long run, a conversion of the world…

 

 

WRITERS TAKE:

   I love the setting of this story. I went to Pisa, Lucca and Florence in the summer of 2012, and the narrow streets made it a great setting for a scary wolf tale. There was graffiti on the walls and I did find the word ‘Paranoid.’ The churches were amazing and I can imagine it all in my mind, as well as the tower in the first part.

   You may be wondering why Amy and Rory are on ice. In series 7 episode one, they have divorced and I found it very sudden how this just randomly happened. So I thought I would build on that (this being series 6.1) so it wouldn’t seem so out of the blue. How could Amy upset Rory the most? By making him wait again.

   In terms of Harpal, Amy knows, but is too busy wrapped up with Rory, and has to let the events flow. Paradox?

   It’s getting close to the end and the conclusion…

 

 

 

DOCTOR WHO RETURNS IN

“THE HOUR OF THE WOLD.”

 

COMING SOON…

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