Romance In Cheshire

This is the first Fan fiction I've EVER wrote. It's been sitting there in my notes on my iPad so I thought I should put it up!

Dedicated to my sister Kelsey (she's in it)

I haven't changed anything from this story, Liam's hair is the long curly hair in it. Yep that's how old it is. It might suck but it's my first one like I said :) hope you enjoy! :)


16. I've Never Seen Louis So In Love

-Evelyn's POV-

After we were done we all headed back to the beach Me,Harry,Kelsey and Louis stood at the shore Harry and Louis were a little bit behind me so I got back to talking to Kelsey
"have you and Louis kissed?" I asked her
"nope we have not"
"we have not done what?" Louis said looking at us
"kiss" me and Kelsey said at the same
"oh I could do that right now and you be amazed" Louis said
"yea sure Lou" Kelsey said sarcastically and chuckled
"don't worry about it Lou their just teasi-"
Louis walked over to Kelsey and grabbed her face in his hands and kissed her passionately
Harry stood beside me we were shocked at Louis' sudden move
We stood there and stared at Louis and Kelsey with our mouths open then looked at each other and smiled. Harry picked up and twirled me around
I laughed and so did he, he put me back on the ground and I put my hand on his cheek and rubbed his cheek with my thumb
He looked back at Louis and Kelsey
"they finished" Harry said chuckling I looked back watching Louis and Kelsey smiling at each other
"I have never seen her so happy" I said looking back at Harry
" I've never seen Louis so in love" he looked at me and smiled
"he looks like a good kisser I said a smirk building Harry looked at me a d raised his brows
"better than me?" he stared at me
"maybe I don't know" I love joking around with Harry.
"your screwing with me right?"
"yeah I am" I said
" am I?"
"yes Harry you are" I said smiling at
" your a good kisser too" he said nudging me
' you ain't seen nothing yet" I said
"your making me wanna kiss you" he said
"that's what I'm aiming for" I looked at him a smiled
Thunder boomed and it started to poor down rain
We ran for the umbrellas...when we were all under the umbrellas
Harry put his arm around me I cuddled up to him I was freezing I put the shirt Harry gave me on he put the shirt he brought on and wrapped his towel and my towel around me
" Harry I'm warm now" I said smiling at him
" ok" he said smiling at me I looked over at Kelsey and Louis they were huddled together
I caught sight of Liam I looked down and back up to him he was looking at me
I smiled at him and he smiled at me
"anyone wanna make a run for it to the car?" Zayn asked
"why go into the car lets dance in the rain!" Louis said grabbing Kelsey's hand and pulling her out into the rain
"wanna go?" Harry said to me with a smile
"yeah let's go" he grabbed my hand and we went out and danced in the rain
When we stopped we were soaked again but we didn't care
Harry looked into my eyes and smiled at me I kissed him and he picked me up
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