5. The Faked Death

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AMY: I’m so sorry Rory; I just can’t give it up…

The Flood has started a war, and the Doctor is stuck. He devises a plan to send two people home in a spacesuit. Harpal and Amy take on the challenge, much to Rory’s anger. The Doctor tries to hide Harpal in his school, but something waits on the train…

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4. The Flood of Fire

 

PART 4

THE FLOOD OF FIRE

 

 

QUEUE OPENING TITLES.

 

OPEN IN THE FLOODS LARE.

 

BRIAN: Maddie has not returned, I shall destroy the boy.

 

FLASH HARPAL’S HOUSE, HARPAL HAS WATER ON HIS HAND, AND HE HAS HIS EYES SHUT.

 

HARPAL: I swear something should have happened by now.

 

(From behind the door)

 

THE DOCTOR: Nothing should have happened because that is only mineral water from Amy’s bottle! Good eh? I just disintegrated Maddie!

 

HARPAL: Do you mean, I nearly died of an overload of electrical impulses for nothing? You scared me to death you idiot!

 

FLASH TO SIMRAN CLIMBING OUT OF THE BIN. SHE GOES ROUND THE BACK WAY AND OVER THE FENCE.

 

SIMRAN: What are you up to little bro?

 

FLASH BACK TO HARPAL IN THE BATHROOM.

 

HARPAL: You lying, cheating, Time Lord menace!

 

AMY: Excuse me-

 

HARPAL: Watch it red head! I am having my mega moan fest hear!

 

AMY: So I-

 

RORY: We.

 

AMY: Heard.

 

THE DOCTOR: Hey Ponds! Go back into the TARDIS! My TARDIS tracker says Brian is on his way, and the big green button has been pimped to track water too, and that water on you’re hand will look like Maddie has turned you into a flood monster!

 

HARPAL: Ok, but when Brian gets here wont he realize that I am not all, wet?

 

THE DOCTOR: Yes but-

 

Amy pushes out of the TARDIS and past the Doctor.

 

AMY: Me being a mistress of-

 

HARPAL: The scariest-

 

AMY: Make up, so open the door and you will get you’re make up kit.

 

HARPAL: You have got to be kidding me.

 

Harpal opens the door to a dry house.

 

HARPAL: Wow, it’s like really dry.

 

AMY: Never mind that!

 

Amy hands Harpal a black marker and eye contacts.

 

HARPAL: What am I meant to do with this?

 

AMY: Pretend to be a flood monster!

 

HARPAL: What?! How am I meant to do that?

 

AMY: Just do it! Get into the bath and get drenched.

 

HARPAL: Got it.

 

Harpal dunks his whole body into the bath with his clothes on, then Amy draw over his teeth and cracks onto his face. Lastly she inserts the contact lenses.

 

HARPAL: I look hideous!

 

AMY: That’s the point.

 

RORY: This is gonna work a treat!

 

THE DOCTOR: When you are ready Harpal, jump out of the window.

 

HARPAL: What?! Are you trying to deliberately kill me? Again?

 

THE DOCTOR: No, but just in case Brian knows it is you, then just jump and we will be there.

 

HARPAL: You better be!

 

AMY: We aren’t gonna let you die!

 

THE DOCTOR: Brian is outside! We have to leave now, come on Ponds!

 

HARPAL: Fine! Go!

 

Everyone goes into the TARDIS and it disappears. Harpal stands at the bathroom sink and hangs his head and begins to shake.

 

FLASH TO SIMRAN AT THE BACK GATE.

 

SIMRAN: What, the hell, is going on?

 

FLASH BACK TO HARPAL IN THE BATHROOM.

 

HARPAL: Ok, Harpal, you can do this.

 

Harpal hangs his head as Brian walks in, then Harpal slowly tilts his head up.

 

HARPAL: I have shared the water of mars.

 

BRIAN: You cannot convince the water of mars!

 

HARPAL: Oh.

 

THE TARDIS IS OUTSDE AND AMY, RORY AND THE DOCTOR ARE STANDING IN FRONT, SIMRAN SNEAKS UP FROM BEHIND AND INTO THE TARDIS.

 

FLASH BACK TO HARPAL AND BRIAN.

 

Brian runs to Harpal, but he runs to the open window and falls out on top of the TARDIS. Harpal looks up and then rolls off to avoid the water and they all get into the TARDIS.

 

THE DOCTOR: Quick!

 

AMY: Argh!

 

HARPAL: That did not work at all!

 

AMY: Yeah, sorry.

 

HARPAL: And how did you get my place as dry and crisp as a, well, crisp?

 

THE DOCTOR: We used about 50 grams of that orange fire which reminds me-

 

HARPAL: Hold up, that substance destroyed 40 square miles of land, destroys the flood creatures and makes soggy carpet like, really dry. So-

 

AMY: So we could destroy the flood monsters with that!

 

THE DOCTOR: I could use the TARDIS light to project the substance, and I have found out from diagnostics that the chemical spread at 100 mph an hour through water. So we need to get to the Thames.

 

FLASH TO THE FLOODS LARE, KATE, JOE AND THE MINERS ARE STANDING BY A MASSIVE FILTER THEY DESTROY IT.

 

KATE: We must take the water to Europe; the water will reach the taps in 2 days. We will descend to the plughole.

 

FLASH TO THE TARDIS.

 

Rory turns around.

 

RORY: Doctor we have a problem.

 

SIMRAN: What is this place? And what was that water creature? And little bro, how do you know these people?

 

THE DOCTOR: How did you get in here?

 

SIMRAN: The door was open! And what are you doing wearing a bow tie?

 

AMY: See, she has good fashion sense!

 

SIMRAN: Clam it red head!

 

Amy hangs her head.

 

HARPAL: Listen, Simran, you’ve got to go!

 

SIMRAN: Well, I am older than you, and I am more responsible than you-

 

THE DOCTOR: You’d be very surprised.

 

SIMRAN: And, shut up I’m talking!

 

HARPAL: Oi! If you stay with us you are probably likely to die!

 

Simran folds her arms and stares.

 

SIMRAN: How thick do you think I am? You said if I come with you I will die, but you. Aren’t. Dead!

 

HARPAL: Well-noticed sis!

 

SIMRAN: So, do what you need to do, and I wont get into you’re way.

 

Amy, Rory and Harpal look at the Doctor.

 

THE DOCTOR: Oh, ok, deal.

 

SIMRAN: Now, get on with it.

 

The others walk up to the console Simran follows.

 

FLASH TO THE FLOODS LARE, JOE, BRIAN, KATE, THE MINERS AND THE POLICEMEN ARE AL GATHERED IN A CIRCLE.

 

BRIAN: Now, the waters shall be drunk in two days, we must now take the waters of mars to the homeland. Europe.

 

KATE: We leave now. We will follow the pipes. And we will reach the mouth of the Thames by nightfall.

 

They all hold their heads up and scream, then they begin to walk along the pipes.

 

FLASH TO THE TARDIS, THE DEVICE THE DOCTOR USED TO DESTROY DAVID IS WIRED TO THE CONSOLE.

 

THE DOCTOR: That is all of power in the time rotor, and I have powered it to follow through and cleanse pipes. Ready?

 

HARPAL: Lets get to the Thames!

 

SHOW THE FLOOD MONSTERS WALKING THROUGH THE SEA LEAVING ESSEX (THE MOUTH OF THE THAMES).

 

THE TARDIS APPEARS IN FRONT OF THE FLOOD MONSTERS.

 

INSIDE…

 

AMY: So this energy is going to go through the whole world cleaning the water?

 

HARPAL: Yeah I think that’s what the Doctor said.

 

RORY: This had better work.

 

THE DOCTOR: It will.

 

SIMRAN: Weirdo’s.

 

The Doctor looks at the TARDIS screen and see’s the flood monsters stop and stare.

 

THE DOCTOR: Ready?

 

RORY: Ready.

 

AMY: Ready.

 

HARPAL: Ready.

 

SIMRAN: Get on with it then!

 

The Doctor clicks a button and out of the TARDIS light the orange substance erupts and disintegrates the flood creatures. It spreads throughout the whole of the Earth, and then show some of the sparks going through pipes and going into taps.

 

HARPAL: That’s it! We did it!

 

Everyone starts hugging each other in celebration.

 

SIMRAN: Take me home right now!

 

Everyone stops and stares.

 

SHOW SIMRAN WALKING OUT OF THE TARDIS WITH HARPAL.

 

SIMRAN: Your secret is safe with me!

 

HARPAL: Seriously?

 

SIMRAN: Yeah course!

 

HARPAL: Ok, bye then.

 

Harpal turns but Simran grabs his arm.

 

SIMRAN: Harps, you will come back won’t you?

 

HARPAL: Yeah, I mean, of course, I will, yeah! I am not gonna leave you all like, forever! But for the moment, I am going.

 

SIMRAN: Ok, be careful little bro. Don’t get eaten by some weird alien thing!

 

Harpal smiles.

 

SIMRAN: Oi listen, he doesn’t know about you does he?

 

HARPAL: What?

 

SIMRAN: The secret? If he find out, its over, that’s it. You get that right?

 

HARPAL: Of course I do.  Tell them to be careful, a team like that based in 1984 could cause havoc to time. Now I have to go.

 

SIMRAN: Ok, goodbye.

 

HARPAL: Bye.

 

Harpal goes into the TARDIS, and it disappears.

 

SHOW THE TARDIS MATERIALISING OUTSIDE AMY AND RORY’S HOUSE, RORY STEPS OUT AND WALKS FORWARD AMY STAYS WITH HER HEAD POKING OUT OF THE DOOR.

 

RORY: Ah! Home sweet home! I seriously need some rest.

 

He turns.

 

RORY: Amy, come on! We are back home! Hooray!

 

Harpal stands next to Amy.

 

HARPAL: Do you want to go?

 

AMY: No. I want to stay. I really want to say.

 

HARPAL: Don’t cry that would just make everything awkward and, wet. And I am gonna be off water for a good few weeks.

 

AMY: What should I do?

 

HARPAL: As a famous person once said, you should follow your heart, but don’t lose your head. Tracy Beaker I think…

 

AMY: That was very unhelpful. But, Rory has my heart.

 

HARPAL: Oh, no, don’t get all-sentimental with me! I don’t do soppy stuff.

 

AMY: I am about to do the most cruelest thing I will ever do.

 

Amy reaches forward and shuts the TARDIS door, Rory turns and it flies away.

 

AMY: Doctor quick!

 

Amy sobs.

 

THE DOCTOR: Amy! What have you done?

 

AMY: I couldn’t leave! I didn’t know how too!

 

THE DOCTOR: Oh Amy.

 

AMY: Rory.

 

FLASH TO RORY SITTING ON HIS FRONT DOORSTEP WITH HIS HEAD HUNG IN DESPAIR.

 

RORY: Amy please, not again.

 

AMY: I’m so sorry Rory, I just can’t give it up.

 

QUEUE ENDING TITLES.

 

 

 

                            

NEXT TIME...

RIVER: Hello Sweetie!

 

THE DOCTOR: Someone has taken control of the TARDIS!

 

HARPAL: What do we do?

 

THE DOCTOR: You need to get out now!

 

Harpal, Amy and River get sucked out of the TARDIS.

 

RIVER: Where’s Rory?

 

The Junk TARDIS appears. As the normal TARDIS disappears.

 

SILENCE: We have the TARDIS!

 

Show Amy holding a gun in her police uniform.

 

AMY: Amy Pond, Torchwood.

 

MARTHA: Explosion 1 has gone off! Where’s Gwen?

 

GWEN: I can’t stop it!

 

Amy shoots the police officer.

 

Show the last Torchwood explosion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WRITERS TAKE:

   For my first 2-parter I think I did a good job. The ending was something that everyone missed I think. The orange fire was still their, but know one thought it would work. And there is more secrets at play, after Harpal has a strange conversation about a time team.

   Also, the way the Flood took it a step further as they planned to venture to Europe, which sounds even more daunting. Also, when my character pretends to be a flood monster, I think that is quite intense, and that’s what I liked about it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DOCTOR WHO RETURNS,

 

WITH THE TORCHWOOD TEAM IN:

 

THE SILENT PLAN

 

 

COMING SOON.

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