Captive in The Dark

Christina is just a regular girl until she is snatched off of the beach on her daily run. when her friend Jen follows her she too finds herself in the hands of her captor. when she does not return home, her mother goes into panic mode. could a stranger she has never met be the key to finding Christina and Jen alive?


4. Addison

*next day*

Christina's point of view:

I wake up to the smell of blood and sterilizer. I jolt awake and see a slender woman standing over a sleeping Jen. She is wearing a lab coat. Like something a doctor would wear...

"What are you doing to her?"

"Just cleaning her up."

"Where did you come from?"


"No. Why are you here? Do you know what these men are doing to us?"

"Yes. They are my brothers. I really don't want to be associated with this 'plan' of theirs. But i heard her scream and i knew she needed help. I'm just addressing her wounds."

"How bad is she hurt?"

"Not too terrible. I you are asking if she is going to die... No. She will be fine"

"Why don't you just turn them in?"

"The doors are locked. I am as much a prisoner as you. Granted i have food and water. But we are all locked in the same house."

"Oh. I just thought you wanted to maybe... Save us or something."

"Believe me! I only came down here to help her. I probably wouldn't have come down if you guys were both OK. My brothers don't know i am down here. Lets just say i want to help. Any way i can!"

"OK. I'm Chris by the way."

"Addison. You can call me Addie. I should get going. They will notice i am gone if i don't sneak back upstairs now. Stay warm, stay awake, an most of all... When she wakes up i need you to tell her to untie you. Once they come down here you two can make a run for it!"

She slowly opens and closes the door behind her.


I scream in a whisper.


She moans but slowly wakes up.

"QUICK! Untie me!"

"I just want to sleep some more, please?"


Upstairs i hear running. The two large men come running downstairs and open the door.

"What is going on down here? Why isn't she tied up? ADDISON! Get down here now!"

Addison comes down the stairs like a mouse. If i wasn't looking i wouldn't have known she was coming.


One of the larger men slapped her across the face.

"What was that for?"

"You are 27 years old! Why are you still acting like a child?"

"Maybe it is because you are treating me like one! Ever think of that?"

He picks her up and throws her over his shoulder. He runs upstairs  with her screaming at him.


I listen carefully as i hear him beating her.

Down here, the man positions Jen against her pole and reties her wrists. He seems to be the nicer of the group of two.

"When can we go home?"

"We have plans. Don't worry."

"That wasn't my question. I said... When can we go home?"

He takes out a gun and points it at me.

"If you are good...Maybe soon. If i shoot you, you can go home today."

I sigh and he leaves the room.

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