Never Give Up-A Louis Tomlinson Fanfic

When Maddie, a Senior in high school meets boy band pop sensation Louis Tomlinson, her life may change for good. Will they end up ultimately falling in love, or will her bad luck with trusting people and troubling past only hurt her even more. Even though things don't always work out in her favor, Maddie has learned one thing in her life, Never Give Up.


3. I Wanna Get To Know You

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You decide to be a little flirty, but to wait a while before you reply, so you don't seem too desperate.

To: Louis:)
Right back at you;)

You giggle an put your phone back in your pocket.

"What's so funny?" Kayte asks you with a smirk on her face.

"Oh, it's nothing..." You say, not able to control your smile.

"It's him isn't it? That guy you were just talking to? Awe how cute, he likes you too!"

"Maybe....and even if it was, I seriously doubt he actually likes me, I mean-" your interrupted by your phone going off, telling you you got a text.

"Who's it from? Let me see it! Give me that!" Kayte screams, grabbing your phone from your hand before you get a chance to read the text, or even see who it was from. "oooohhhh, it's from him!!" she screams, and starts texting him back.

"I swear Kayte, if you reply without me even knowing what he said, there will be consequences!" you scream, not even thinking about what you were saying.

"Oohh 'conquences!' like what? What could you do ot me, you've never hurt a fly!" You both laugh.

"Just give it back! pleas! At least let me see what you said."

"Ugh! Fine, whatever you want...' Kayte said, handing your phone back, so I can read the texts.

From: Louis:)
Hey wanna go grab a coffee sometime soon, I really wanna get to know you;)

To: Louis:)
Yeah, for sure! The sooner the better:)

"Oh gosh Kayte, now I'm gonna seem desperate! Why would you do that?!"

"Well, arn't you?" Kayte questioned

"Well, yeah, but I don't want him thinking that!" you both laugh for a moment, when your phone goes off again. This time you make sure Kayte won't get it...

From: Louis:)
Oh really, the sooner the better? How about right now? Maybe grab something to eat too?

You giggle and ask Kayte if shes okay if you go, since you were out having a shopping day with her.


"Well I feel bad leaving you here, I did come out to have a fun shopping day with you."

"FORGET ME! NOW TEXT HIM BACK BEFORE I HAVE TOO!" Oh good old Kayte, being way to over dramatic.

From that, you take out your phone and text him back...

To: Louis:)
Sure! I'm starving and could go for a cup of coffee:)

From: Louis:)
Meet you at the Starbucks next to the Forever 21 in 15?

To: Louis:)
Sure:) can't wait:) lol;)

"Why do you always use so many smiley faces? That's making you seem more desperate then my text to him!" You both laugh.

"Because that's who I am, I love smiley faces!" You both laugh as you make some dorky smiley face to match

You tell Kayte he wants to meet you at Starbucks in 15 Minutes, and she basically screams loud enough for the whole store to hear.

You talk a little while before you head off, since the Starbucks is right next to where you are.

When you get to Starbucks, you see Louis in the corner, "Maddie, there you are, love, come sit with me." His British accent makes you melt a you head over to sit next to him

"What do you want, love?" He asks

"Umm, can I have a hot chocolate with extra whipped cream?"

"No coffee huh?" He asks.

"I've never been a huge fan, no."

"Well, we'll have to change that." Louis winked at you as he walked to the counter to order your drinks. You giggle a little to yourself. You can't help but shake the feeling that you know him from somewhere, but where.


Sorry this chapter was short, ill try to make up for that my updating a lot. The next chapter will be longer because its their date.

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