Never Give Up-A Louis Tomlinson Fanfic

When Maddie, a Senior in high school meets boy band pop sensation Louis Tomlinson, her life may change for good. Will they end up ultimately falling in love, or will her bad luck with trusting people and troubling past only hurt her even more. Even though things don't always work out in her favor, Maddie has learned one thing in her life, Never Give Up.


5. I Think I'm Falling In Love

There's going to be a lot if back and forth between Maddie and Lou's P.O.V., sorry, but I have a vision in my head on how I want this to go, so yeah.

Oh, and Happy Birthday to our Cupcake Harry! Who else can't believe he's 19!

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-----Lou's P.O.V.-----

"Lets hear it!" I say, then she starts playing...

"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up"

Then I joined in with her on the chorus...

"I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"

Then she stopped playing, and looked into my eyes. The room was silent. I had no idea what to do next...

I looked into her beautiful blue eyes, and I could feel her looking back into mine. The room was silent. I inched closer to her, still keeping eye contact. Soon our lips were inches apart. I leaned in to kiss her, hoping she would kiss me back. When our lips connected, I could feel the sparks fly.

We both pulled back and just stared into each others eyes. It was silent again, until she spoke.

"Um...wanna hear another song..." She asked, obviously not knowing what to say about what just happened. Honestly, I don't either. The kiss make my heart flutter and my stomach was filled with butterflies. I've never felt that way before. Something about her, it just made me feel so happy, and when we kisses, it made me forget about the rest of the world, it was just her and me.

-----Maddie's P.O.V.-----

We both pulled away from the kiss at the same time. I don't really know how I feel about it. I have butterflies in my stomach and I can't even think. Neither of us have said anything. I have a feeling he feels the same way. What do I say? Should I let him talk first. Finally I decide to say something.

"Um..wanna hear another song..." Wow that was stupid, but what else was I supposed to say. I don't know. I can't think. Something about him made me just feel happy, and carefree, kinda like a little kid. Kissing him, I was able to shut out the rest of the world, it was just him and me, together. Oh my god, what's wrong with me, I only met the guy like 12 hours ago.

-----No One's P.O.V.-----

Lou and Maddie spent the next several hours hanging out in the studio, singing and getting to know each other, Louis even sang some of his songs to her. Maddie learned all about Louis' band, it surprised her how she hadn't knew more about them, considering they were like the biggest boy band ever. Louis learned Maddie has always dreamed about having a career as a performer, and how she's always wanted to make an album and go on tour to sold out shows. They seemed like a match made in heaven.

After the left the studio, Lou drove Maddie home. When they reached the door, they kisses once again, and the spark grew even bigger, maybe even becoming a small flame.

-----Lou's P.O.V.-----

I dropped her off at her house and we kissed again, I got the same feelings I had gotten before in the studio. Oh god Louis, pull it together, you only met this girl this morning!

I head home, to my flat that I share with one of my best mates, Harry. I head in the door, he knew I had a date, so obviously I should tell him what happened.

"Hey Harry!" I say as I walk in the door.

"Hey, how did your date go?"

"Pretty well actually, there was defiantly something between us."

-----Maddie's P.O.V.-----

When Lou dropped me off, he kissed me again, and I felt the same sparks I felt in the studio. Omg I gotta call Kayte!

The phones ringing, in really anxious for her to answer, "Hey Gurl! How did your date go with Louis!?" Kayte screamed into the phone, causing me to have to pull it away from my ear.

"I wouldn't really call it a date, more-"

I was interrupted by Kayte, "What would you call it then?!"

"More just hanging out..." You mumbled.

"What did you guys do?" Kayte questioned.

"We'll we were at Starbucks for a good hour, probably more. I told him I like to sing, and have actually written a few songs. Then he said he didn't believe me, so I said I could so if anywhere anytime. So he took me to this recording studio, he's in a band by the way, and I sang him one of my songs, an then he asked if I knew any popular songs, I told him I knew 'Titanium' by David Guetta. Then I started playing it an sang it, and he started singing too, then we-we- um. We kinda kissed..." I said that all so fast, I could barley catch my breath.

-----Lou's P.O.V-----

"What do you mean 'something?'" My best mate, Harry questioned.

"I mean, I think we could be together for a while. I took her to the studio, see really talented she writes songs and plays the piano. She even knows 'Titanium' by David Guetta, we sang it together-" I said, not really knowing what I was saying.

"The what?" Harry asked.

"Then, I-I um...I kinda kissed her."

-----Maddie's P.O.V.-----

"Woah, woah, woah, what do you mean 'kinda' kissed?" Kayte screamed into the phone, once again making me pull it away from my ear.

"Well not kinda, we did kiss. After we sang together."


"Yeah! It felt amazing too! Like we were the only ones in the world. I felt special, and I can't really explain it. I think..."

-----Lou's P.O.V-----

"Cool, good for you bro! Was that it, if you know what I mean?" Harry asked, wiggling his eyebrows.

"Yes Harry, that was it! But there was something special about it. Something I haven't felt before. When our lips connected, sparks flew. It was amazing. Harry, I think..."

"You think what? Come on, spit it out!"

-----Maddie's P.O.V.-----

"You think what Maddie!? Spit it out! Your really irritating me!" Kayte screamed.

"Well..." I hesitated.

"Just tell me!"

"I think I'm falling in love..."

-----Lou's P.O.V.-----

"I think in falling in love..."


Again, sorry for all the switches in the P.O.V.

I don't know if ill be able to update tomorrow, but I promise I'll update at least once before Monday.

Thank y'all mor reading! It means a lot thinking people are actually reading the things I write. Xx
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