Never Give Up-A Louis Tomlinson Fanfic

When Maddie, a Senior in high school meets boy band pop sensation Louis Tomlinson, her life may change for good. Will they end up ultimately falling in love, or will her bad luck with trusting people and troubling past only hurt her even more. Even though things don't always work out in her favor, Maddie has learned one thing in her life, Never Give Up.


4. First Date

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When you get to Starbucks, you see Louis in the corner, "Maddie, there you are, love, come sit with me." His British accent makes you melt a you head over to sit next to him

"What do you want, love?" He asked

"Umm, can I have a hot chocolate with extra whipped cream?"

"No coffee huh?" He asks.

"I've never been a huge fan, no."

"Well, we'll have to change that." Louis winked at you as he walked to the counter to order your drinks. You giggle a little to yourself. You can't help but shake the feeling that you know him from somewhere, but where.

"Here's your hot chocolate, love."

"Thanks, extra whipped cream?"

"Wow, someone's needy," Louis laughes, "but of corse. So, tell me about you."

"Well, I'm a senior in high school, and I'm set to graduate next month, I don't know what's going to happen after that, I guess I'll just go with the ow and see what happens." I laugh.

"Well, that sounds interesting, that's kinda what I did, and now I'm in a band with my four best mates, were on holiday at the moment."

He's in a band! That's where you think you've seen him before. But wait what band? "What's your bands name?" You ask. He looks at you surprised before he answers.

"One Direction." He answers.

"Oh yeah I've heard if you."

"Yeah, not to toot my on horn, but we are pretty popular." He says, jokingly looking proud. I couldn't help but giggle.

"Oh really?" I say, trying to be flirty, I've never even good at that, so I just laugh.

-----Louis' P.O.V.-----

God she's cute when she laughs. She has her own little giggle, and it's really cute, i actually fid it attractive. She laughs at almost anything too. She's really cute a bubbly, and so far, has an awesome personality. Wow, I could see us dating each other and being together for a while. Oh wait did she say something? What did she say? She's laughing again, damn that's cute. Wait, I'm doing it again. What did she say? Ok, I'll just laugh to and hope it wasn't a real question. Thank God it wasn't.

"So, Louis, do you have in siblings?"

"Yes, actually I have five sisters all younger then me..."

"Awe, cute, what are their names?"

"Well, there's Charlotte (we call her Lottie), Georgia Austin, Felicite (we call her Fizzy), and twins Phoebe and Daisy."

"Awe.m, how cute. Your so lucky, I've always wanted a younger sister to play with, I'm an only child."

"Well, if you want, you can have one of mine." I say, which makes her laugh again, oh her laugh is so cute. Oh and her eyes, there such a bright blue, I could look into them forever. They're beautiful. I must've zoned out again, cause the next thing I know she's trying to get my attention.

"Anyone in there?" She said as she waved he hand in front of my face.

"Oh sorry, love, I was just thinking."

"What are ya thinking about?" She singsonged.

"Oh nothing...."

"Come had to be thinking about something." She looked at me again with her beautiful blue eyes.

"Ok fine, I was just thinking about how beautiful your eyes are. I could look into them and get lost for days." She looked down and blushed. "Oh wow, I just realized how corny that"

"That's ok, I actually think it's kinda cute when guys say stupid corny stuff..."

"Well, ill have to remember tell me, did it hurt when you fell from Heaven?" Oh god, what did I just say, I don't know why, but for some reason I really like Maddie, I could see us being together for a long time.

"Well, maybe not that corny, but your on the right track." She winked, and we both laughed when she said this. Good, she didn't think I was some weirdo, and if she did, she didn't seam to care.

-----Maddie's P.O.V-----

Oh god, did I just wink at him. Why did I do that? I've always been super bad at flirting, I don't want to ruin this date with my awkwardness.

"What do you like to do for fun, Maddie?" Louis asked me.

"Well, I like to read, but what I really like to do is sing and write songs."

"Oh really?" Louis asks with interest. "Do you play any instruments?"

"Yes actually, the piano, I'm pretty good if I don't say so myself!" I laugh.

"Oh really? You care to prove that? Cause I don't believe you actually write songs" Lou said me.

"Oh yeah! Anywhere anytime!" I almost scream. Oh crap, what am I doing.

"Ok how about right now?" Louis asks, "you said anytime, and I have a place we can go."

Hesitantly I reply, "lets go!" What have I gotten myself into. I mean. I do know how to play the piano, and I do write songs, but I've never preformed them for anyone, not even my mom. I mean I would have, but they could probably care less about me. I guess there's no going back now.

"Lets go then!" Louis says with a wink that makes my heart melt.

"Where are we going Lou, can I call you that?"

"Sure, love, I don't mind." Awe, every time he calls me love, my heart flutters in my chest, I know it's a British thing, but still. "You'll see where we're going."

"Ok, just tell me it's not some weird creeper place...."

"Defiantly not, love, I promise, you'll love it!" I sure hope he's right.

We pull up to this building, I have no idea what it is or where were going. We park at enter the building and go to the 5th floor. We go through a bunch oh hallways. There are a lot of doors that require a pass code, but Louis knew all of them. We finally reach where I think we're supposed to be. When he opens the door, I see we're in a recording studio. My mouth drops.

-----Louis' P.O.V.-----

I open the door, and her mouth basically drops to the floor.

"Well here you go, show me what you got..." I said gesturing toward the recording booth with a piano in it.

"Are you sure it's okay if I use this?" She asked, seeming concerned.

"Yeah, go ahead, love, or are you chicken?" I say jokingly.

"I'm not chicken!" She protests heading to the studio.

Without her knowing I hit the record button because I know she's gonna be good.

She starts playing the piano, and I can believe it. She's amazing. She's beyond amazing, the best I've haver heard. Then she starts singing...

"I may look strong

I may look tough

But for you it's never enough

I still I give it all I can"

...that can't be her. She has the voice of an angle. But when you listened to her lyrics, you heard truth. You heard passion. She continued singing....

"Forever is a long time,

Know you can make it, through

True love will always find a way

When the skies crashing down, no ill never give up

When the storms going round, no ill never give up

When their trying to tear me down, no ill never give up

I'm here to stay"

She finishes and I come into the sound booth...."well?" She asks.

It took me a second to respond, but when I could, all I could say was, "I. Am. Literally. Speechless."

"I'm not that good...."

"Do you know any other songs, like popular ones?" I asked.

"Yeah, I know 'Titanium' by David Guetta..."

"Lets hear it!" I say, then she starts playing...

"You shout it out,

But I can't hear a word you say

I'm talking loud not saying much

I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet

You shoot me down, but I get up"

Then I joined in with her on the chorus...

"I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose

Fire away, fire away

Ricochet, you take your aim

Fire away, fire away

You shoot me down but I won't fall

I am titanium

You shoot me down but I won't fall

I am titanium"

Then she stopped playing, and looked into my eyes. The room was silent. I had no idea what to do next...


This chapter is really long guys, haha. I told you! If you have any ideas on what should happen next please let me know!

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