Loved You First *Louis Tomlinson Fanfiction*

What happens when life-long (literally since birth!) best friends Claire and Louis lose a friendship so unbreakable? One Direction tore Louis away, leaving Claire in the dust. Can she move on? When Louis comes back after years and years, can they just 'pick up' where they left off? Read "Loved You First" to find out just how much friendship, love, and tragedy can impact on two lives.


9. Thursday Part 2!!!!!


This is my chance. I love her, she has to say yes, right?! I mean, we've known each other since birth! We gazed into each others eyes....and I fell in love all over again. Her eyes so sweet, warm, welcoming, beautiful. I can tell she got them from her mom. I felt the lump in my pocket.

This is it, this is it!!!!!!!

I got her attention. Then, I kneeled.

"Claire-Bear, will you marry me?" I asked, pulling out the box with the ring.

She gasped. Silence. It was killing me. Why isn't she saying yes?!



He just asked me to marry him.....!!!!! A million thoughts raced through my head. Do I say yes?! Wait--what about college? What about One Direction? We are still so young!

"Hello?" Lou asked. I stood there looking like an idiot.

"Oh Lou--"

"Just please say yes. I want to spend my whole life with you, and only you." His deep voice was so smooth and handsome, how could I say no??

"Are you considering saying no?" Lou asked. He looked scared and hurt. It's just, was I ready? I don't know if it was that, it was some feeling I couldn't put a finger on.

"Well, uh, I, uh, I dunno, I, I, oh Louis William Tomlinsion--"

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