Loves A Crazy Thing... (Not Famous 1D Fiction) (Finished)

A Fan Fiction about 4 friends on an adventure in LA but what happens when they meet 5 guys.. This will have love and of course Drama... (Finished)

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4. A Visitor and The Hospital

~The Next Morning~

Abbigail POV

I think Louis likes me not Nicki!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!

Nicki POV

LOUIS LIKES ABBIGAIL! Ugh.. I love him.. I think... I went downstairs and saw Louis plant one on Abbigail,"Umm Awkward.." "Sorry" said the gorgeous Louis

Abbigail POV

Nicki came in during a LOUIS kiss!! Ugh..

Liam POV

"Hey guys my friend Eleanor is staying the night" "Awesome.. I guess.." said Louis.

~Later~

Eleanor POV

I walked in and saw the best looking guy ever... Louis.. That boy will be mine...

~Later~

Louis POV

Ugh this is just a love rectangle! Eleanor decided to come into my life but i'm dating Abbigail.. Why is life so complicated???

~Even Later~

Abbigail POV

"Umm Lou-" I stopped at the sight of a kiss between Louis and Eleanor... "Louis?" "Abbigail umm it's just.." "JUST WHAT?" "I'm sorry I guess I liked her too!" As I burst into tears and ran into the kitchen thinking I should just end everything.. My boyfriend I loved just kissed one of his best friends friend.

Eleanor POV

Looks like i"m getting what I want. Louis will just come to me.. >:)

Abbigail POV

As I got the knife ready a brown haired boy with greenish blue eyes yelled,"Stop!" It was the boy I hated the most. "Why should I? I hate you so just leave me alone and let me make my own decisions!" "Don't"

Louis POV

I was to late... She didn't kill herself but she cut.. Badly.. She had to get to the hospital

 

Authors Note: Hello my Payners (if you check my profile that's what i call my fans) how do you like my first fan fiction posted on here?? PLEASE NO HATE ON ELEANOR ANY WHERE I DIDN'T MEAN TO OFFEND ANYBODY! SO PLEASE NO HATRED! What couple do you like? Abbigail & Louis,Nicki & Louis,Genifer & Harry,or Genifer & Liam?? Please tell me you can comment and thanks for reading!

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