You've changed my life baby

Amelia also know as Melisa by all her friends is a normal girl who loves Valentines Day! Two friends share a secret about them! Her wonderful boyfriend Louis takes them both on a romantic evening... Later on an accident happens!


This is my entry for the valentine's day 1shot41D competition (if you don't like one direction then you probably shouldn't read it but it's your choice)!!! Please comment,like,Favourite! : )


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11. Notice!!!! <3

 

Rewriting

 

Right I rewrote this it still has the same plan but it written much better in my opinion.

I finally figured out how I would fix this story with the bad writing so I hope you all think it's better :) 

Please comment what you think of the rewrite!! 

Thank you, byeee xx

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