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Here to give the movellas with less viewers a chance and for everyone to find new movellas to read. I'll be looking at movellas from the group "New Movellians." Or... Nominations from the comments. I can start a rate system. 1 star to 5 star. You can nominate yourself, I honestly don't mind. I hope you enjoy the movellas in this movella. I'll try to upload as much as I can.

Any genres are welcome. Romance, Fanfictions, Fantasy, Poems etc.

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The point in which I write this movella is not only for the benefit of the featured movellas but also writers can see other's stories and how they can improve on theirs. Sometimes I point out the same thing on different movellas because I believe they can both improve in the same... sense. So I hope reading this movella will help improve your writing. :)

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10. Weightless

Weightless by The Artist.    Realism

Soon to be fifteen, Brianna Cress's one dream is to be super-model skinny, just like all the other teens in the world. The path brings her to being anorexic, but will she become bulimic? Jacob Scott, a fellow classmate has always had a thing for Brianna. There's something different. Her hips are more prominent and her eyes are too hollow. It's up to Jacob to revive Brianna's confidence, beauty, and possibly her life... Can he do it? Or will he fail to make her smile.

I love the first chapter where it's full of amazing short phrases. It's a great way to start a movella. This novel is full of description. When she's weighing herself and her emotions are jumping around, you can feel it. The author describes the scale sliding across the bathroom floor as a scale that screeches across the floor as it's pushed back. The story's blurb is also very eye-catching. The topic deals with teen-anorexia which is a big deal. So many are self harming and I feel this story includes a very important message, which is that no one should feel bad about their shape. There are people who love you as you are. Don't ever change. 

I enjoyed the story and I just saw a couple of missing commas but overall it was amazing.

Realism is harder topic to write so when I saw this movella, I knew I had to check it out and it was amazing. I hope you think so too :)

Amazing job to the author, I can't wait to read more :)

Rate: 4.5/5

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