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Here to give the movellas with less viewers a chance and for everyone to find new movellas to read. I'll be looking at movellas from the group "New Movellians." Or... Nominations from the comments. I can start a rate system. 1 star to 5 star. You can nominate yourself, I honestly don't mind. I hope you enjoy the movellas in this movella. I'll try to upload as much as I can.

Any genres are welcome. Romance, Fanfictions, Fantasy, Poems etc.

*Recruiting co-authors for this movella

The point in which I write this movella is not only for the benefit of the featured movellas but also writers can see other's stories and how they can improve on theirs. Sometimes I point out the same thing on different movellas because I believe they can both improve in the same... sense. So I hope reading this movella will help improve your writing. :)

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11. Mental Stricken Madness

Mental Stricken Madness : Wishfulthinkingxo

 

Amelia a young girl of shy persona, has volunteered to help at her mother's work place of which is a mental hospital, only to find out that the former member of One Direction, Harry Styles is suffering from Generalized Anxiety Disorder and has been sectioned for 6 months. He is unable to communicate with anyone, suffering from trust issues and panic attacks, however will Amelia be able to reach out to him?

*Copied word for word from the blurb*

 

The author, wishfulthinkingxo, gave an in-depth description of the surroundings and especially the feelings of Harry Styles. I'm not sure what sucked me into the story, whether it was the very alluring blurb or the title, I'm glad it did. Only 1 chapter has been posted but I'm certainly looking forward to more. 

The one thing I'd suggest is the tense change. The author moved from, "I sit here-" and then in the middle it turns to, "Suddenly I heard-" It's important to keep the tense in one form. It started as present and moved to past. 

Otherwise.... This movella is one that I know will be at the top of the Most Popular Fan Fiction of the month. 

Best of luck to the author!

 

Oh and by the way... this is her first movella :)

 

Rate: 4.99/5

 

- KellyG

 

P.S. I'm still doing this movella... and I'm trying my best to read the ones in the comments :) Bye for now.

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