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Here to give the movellas with less viewers a chance and for everyone to find new movellas to read. I'll be looking at movellas from the group "New Movellians." Or... Nominations from the comments. I can start a rate system. 1 star to 5 star. You can nominate yourself, I honestly don't mind. I hope you enjoy the movellas in this movella. I'll try to upload as much as I can.

Any genres are welcome. Romance, Fanfictions, Fantasy, Poems etc.

*Recruiting co-authors for this movella

The point in which I write this movella is not only for the benefit of the featured movellas but also writers can see other's stories and how they can improve on theirs. Sometimes I point out the same thing on different movellas because I believe they can both improve in the same... sense. So I hope reading this movella will help improve your writing. :)

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2. 2 Stories From New Movellians. Involves 1D

All About You by Michaela Leigh

Bethany Livingston is in a loop of bad luck. Every time something good happens... an event that's bad always comes in front. When something devastating happens to her sister she realizes her must stand up and regain her life. After meeting someone named Harry, something bad happens once again but could it be bad enough to risk her new found relationship? 

This movella was really detailed and at some points I felt like I was in the story. My suggestions are just to be care with possessions and plurals. Such as "Sisters fiancé" and "Sister's fiancé." It makes a big difference when you're the viewer. I wasn't sure if I'd like it in the beginning since "Harry" was in the story but I think it's a pretty good movella. I definitely recommend it to movellians who like to read a realistic book instead of those cliche movellas where everything is happy and when the boy and girl meet... they fall in love. This story includes drug and abuse, but the content is not too in depth so it's for all ages.  

I personally really enjoyed it. :)

Rate: 4/5

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Stolen Innocence by ashley sheeran-horayne

Harry, Niall, Liam, Louis, and Zayn hear a girl playing the guitar and they all fell in love with her looks and her voice. The girl has eyes for Harry but after going out with him, she found him as just another one-night-stand type of guy. 

This movella was very descriptive and at some parts, I laughed and at another I'd got chills. The problem was, I felt this movella was a bit unrealistic and a bit predictable. The girl went out with 3 of the lads in less than a day. I think it's a bit too much. This is just from my point of view... but it's not like something like that would happen in real life... As for the predictable part... I felt like I knew what was going to happen in the story... even if it was a cliffhanger. 

I would recommend this story only if you truly like One direction. Harry is portrayed as a one-night-stand type of guy in this movella. Just saying.

Rate: 3/5

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That's it for today :) Congratulations to the Movelly winners! Still looking for co-authors :) Please suggest some non-1d movellas. :) x

[Posted January 11, 2013 @ 1:36am]

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