Maddy's perfect Life? [Complete]

Okay, so I wasn't going to add any stories for a while, as I have a lot to update with, but I recently found this one and its nearly completed so I thought I would just put it on anyway I hope you enjoy, and If I get enough likes I might do a sequel.

Its about a young girl named Maddy. Its a Harry fan-fiction. Thats all Im going to say, If you want to know more then you'r going to have to read.

Also im sorry if anything is spelt wrong, or anything offensive, I did write this about a year ago, when I had no Idea and had no experience of writing a fan fic.

Thank you!x
<3 Katie x

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2. Telling Rachel!x

 

Maddys Pov:   Im sitting in my room at half 6 its monday night, im waiting for Rachel to finish having a shower because she is staying the night I manage to get my dad to agree. You may have noticed that I don't write about my mum that much, there is a reason behind that and you will find out soon enough. Im going through in my head how to tell Rachel about going to London maybe I should just ask her to come? but would she say no?. I grab my laptop from under my bed and bring up google, I type in One Direction because I was right that song stayed in my head all day! However Rachel was right today was awesome It was so funny watching everyone running around the zoo and our teachers screaming at them to stop acting like animals and everyone laughing harder. I noticed the first thing that come up on my screen once I had typed that in was Harry Styles slept with 6 girls?    I hadn't noticed but while I was reading through the article Rachel had come out and all dressed had sat beside me reading over my shoulder.   "Hey whats that all about then, whos One Direction?"   She asked  me and scaring me so much I felt like I was going to have a heart attack.   "Oh,um just the band I heard on the radio this morning, I had their song in my head all day, so I thought I would get some knowledge on them".   I replied closing my laptop. It was now or never I had to talk to Rachel about London,time was running out.   "Rachel, I need to talk to you about...about the 9 weeks we have off."   I stammered out as Rachel was taking the Laptop of me and was reading the article. She slowly glanced up reading my face impression and gently said   "Okay, whats wrong?"   " umm, I don't really know how to tell you this but here goes, I'm going to London for 9 weeks my flight is on saturday at 10:30am and im sorry im leaving you but you can come out and visit or you can come with me?".   Rachel looked at me for a few minutes before turning back to the screen and typing in Youtube One Direction Were the kids in America, and then looking back at me and saying;   "Madds thats amazing your finally going travelling, I wish I could come to but sundays my birthday I cant leave my family, and I will be sad that I wont see you on my birthday...but I have had a great idea why dont I come out on the Tuesday and stay the rest of the time with you, I will just have to find the money"   I saw her face turn sad we both new her parents wouldn't have the money.   "I will pay for your flight!"   "Rachel your my best friend and im going to need your help to search for my brother!"   Rachel leant over and  gave me a hug then her phone started going into the tune of Jessie J price tag.   Rachels Pov   I was in the shower when I saw her cupboard was open a little bit, when I had finished I went to close the cupboard but something caught my eye, there was two bags of razor blades one opened and the other still sealed, I suddenly felt sick of the thought that my best friend was at her old habit again I thought she had got over that she told me she had!. I got dressed and went out to confront her when I noticed that she was concentrating hard on something she was reading on her laptop. I sneaked over and sat behind her reading the article over her shoulder 'Harry Styles slept with 6 girls?'.. what is going on, who is Harry Styles? . 10 minutes later I was searching up about this band called One Direction and me and Madds was talking about her trip to London, she is so lucky to have rich parents who want to spoil her I really wish I could go, although she says she will pay for my plane ticket I feel bad for taking her money. All of a sudden my phone starts going off with my ring tone of Jessie J Price tag, I looked at the caller id; Unknown..hmm I answered the phone;   'Hello, Rachel speaking, who's this?' "Hey Rachel, its Matt im on Jakes phone, you coming park? 'Oh Hey Matt nope spending time with my best one before she leaves me for London talk later yeah?' "What, Madds going to London? but..." Rachel had already hung up the phone,   "well, someone definitely has a big crush on you"   I said to Maddy. I laughed and closed all the tabs on her computer and  shut it down.   Maddys pov:   "He does not Rachel!"   I said hitting her playfully with a pillow.   "Lets go downstairs I will get dad to make us popcorn and we can watch some thrillers?"   "Okay lets go"   Rachel replied already running down the stairs.. Im so going to miss her! I don't know how I will cope without her ..it made me feel a bit sick so I decided to not think about it for the rest of the time!.     Authors note;   Okay, so I hope you all are liking this story so far, Sorry its taking me ages to upload the chapters, I just have to sort out the format and space it a bit more. I will be having loads more chapters on here for you hopefully by the next few hours! would love some feedback! Maybe you could also check out my other fanfics? Im currently working on Fight for Love and Drama for Louis.   Thank you, Your all Amazayn!!x <3 Katie :) x
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