Haunted. 15+

Ally and her boyfriend Louis Tomllinson of One Direction moves into an old house in a small town. The first day Ally sees someone in one of the windows. She thought to herself that she was just tired. She walks into the bedroom and sees that the mirror has a huge gash. She slides her finger over it and cuts her finger. She want Louis to look at it but when Louis is looking at the mirror there is no gash. She was sure that it was there just two minutes ago. Louis says that she's probably just tired. But strange things begins to happen in the house. Ally and Louis have no idea what's about to happen to them. Will the 'person' in the house hurt them? Will anyone believe them? The big question is will they survive?! Read to find out!:) .xx


11. She's in a coma?!

A/N  Heey guys!:) I'm sorry for the late update but my grandpa past away and I'm really sad and my dad's moving 800 kilometers away!:'( I hope that you like my fan fic and I love you for reading it!<3


Louis' POV.

I walked into our house together with Harry after a long day with recording our solos for our album. "Ally?!" I shouted. No answer. Hmmm she texted me earlier that she was home. "Ally?!" I called out again. Still no answer. "do you have any idea where she could be?" I asked Harry.

"Sorry mate I have no idea. Try call liam." He said. Yeah of corse Liam probably know!

"Hi Li do you know where Ally is?" I asked him.

"I'm sorry Lou but she's at the hospital" Liam said. His voice was deep from crying.

"WHAT?! WHAT HAPPENED?!" I yelled into the phone.

"I don't know"

"What do you mean that you don't fucking know Liam?!"

"We don't know what happened because Ally's in a coma" Liam said. He was crying really hard.

"We'll be there as soon as posible" I said totally numb. Tears were streaming down my cheeks.

"What happened Boo?" Harry asked and hugged me.

"She's in a coma Haz" I said between sobs.




Harry's POV.

She was laying in the bed with her eyes closed. Her skin was so pale and she had bruieses everwhere. The other boys had taken Louis out to get some fresh air. I sat down on the bed beside her and stroked her hair away from her face. I took her hand in mine. It was so cold. "Ally please wake up. I- we miss you" I said and left out a small sob.


"I remember tears streaming down your face
When I said, "I'll never let you go"
When all those shadows almost killed your light
I remember you said, "Don't leave me here alone"
But all that's dead and gone and passed tonight

Just close your eyes
The sun is going down
You'll be alright
No one can hurt you now
Come morning light
You and I'll be safe and sound

Don't you dare look out your window, darling,
Everything's on fire
The war outside our door keeps raging on
Hold on to this lullaby
Even when the music's gone

Just close your eyes
The sun is going down
You'll be alright
No one can hurt you now
Come morning light
You and I'll be safe and sound

Oooh, Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
Oooh, Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
La La (La La)
La La (La La)
Oooh, Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
Oooh, Oooh, Oooh, Oooh
La La (La La)

Just close your eyes
You'll be alright
Come morning light,
You and I'll be safe and sound...

Oooh, oooh, oooh, oooh oh oh. [x7]" I finished the song with tears streaming down my face. My heart was in peices. I still love Ally but she's my best mates girl. I kissed her forehead and laid down beside her in hospitalbed.


It's been almost a month now and Ally's still sleeping. I've stayed almost every night in case she would wake up. Louis is totally out of his mind. He can'r bear being around her when she's so weak. The doctors don't know if she will ever wake up. The first weeks were the worst 'cause her heart were on to much pressure so there was a machine helping her heart to keep going. But as the strong girl she is she can now handle it on her own. I want to she her eyes sparkle more an anything else.

Ally walked into my room and sat on the bed. "Harry I think I might be in love with you" she said and looked me in the eyes.

"I know that I AM in love with YOU" I said and leaned in. Ally closed her eyes. Our lips were moving in sync. It started to get heated I laid us down on the bed and our clothes were on the floor. I sat up in the bed breathing heavly. I took a deep breath. I was still at the hospital. It was just a dream. It felt so real. I stoked a finger along my lips. It was like I could still feel her lips on mine. I looked over at girl that was laying beside me. The light from the moon was shining threw the window and down on Ally. She looked so peacefull. I leaned down and planted a soft kiss on her forehead. I held her hand and gave a little squeeze. When I was about to get up to pee her hand gave mine a little squeeze too. "Ally wake up you can do this!" I said and shook her.


Ally's POV.

Everytime I wanted to wake up the dark took over and pulled me back. I wanted to wake up so badly. I want to see the boys. I miss them. Harry has been here almost every night. I could feel a hand in mine. I couldn't open my eyes or move. The person was about to leave so I used all my power and squeeze. I was about to fall back into the darkness but I wouldn't let it happen. "Ally you can do this!" I heard a voice say. I shut up in the bed breathíng heavly. I saw a shocked Harry standing in front of me. "ALLY!" I shouted and hugged me thightly.


"Harry! I've missed you" I said and hugged him back. Tears were streaming down my cheeks of joy.

"I'll go get a doctor" Harry said and was about to leave but I grabbed his arm.

"Harry please I don't want you to leave me" I pleaded. He sat down on the bed and swung his long legs up again. I noticed that he was only in his boxers. "Uhm Harry. Why aren't you wearing any clothes?" I asked and started to giggle. He looked down at himself.

"Because you're really warm when you're sleeping" He said and smiled. He put an arm around my shoulders. I leaned my head against his shoulder.

"How long have I been sleeping?" I asked afarid of the answer. Harry looked sad.

"You've been in a coma for a month. You were lucky. The doctors were about to lose hope" he said and a tear fell from his eye. I kissed his cheek and smiled up at him. His green eyes were sparkling in the moonlight.
"Where's Louis?" I asked wondering why it was Harry and not Lou.

"He's at home. He couldn't bear seeing you in that state..... Ally what happened?" He asked and looked into my eyes. His eyes filled with tears and fear.

"I was talking with Liam and suddenly all the power went out. Something grabbed my ancle and dragged me down to the basement and then everything went black" I said and shook my head.

"Oh God. I'm so glad you're okay now. I'll never let anything happen to you again. I love you" he said and kissed the top of my head.

"I love you too Harry. Get some rest" I said and kissed his cheek. He laied down and fell asleep.He wrapped his strong arms around me and I felt safe. Only a moment later I was fast asleep.


Harry's POV.

I told Ally I loved her like LOVE loved her.



A/N Heeey babes!<3 What do you think? You better like it! I was writing this insted of doing homework!:) But you guys are worth it!<3 Soooo in the next chapter I'll explain in details what happened to Ally!<3 And sorry for any wrong gramma or anything! It's late and I'm really sleepy! Zzzzzz....

Love you!<3

Byeee!:) .x














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