My Last Goodbye

Mia Rose White had the perfect life. She had 5 talented, best friends; Harry, Liam, Niall, Louis who happens to be her brother and lastly Zayn; the person who she has loved most her life.

For a second everything was going right. Until one day Mia receives devastating news which will change everything.

Will the boys abandon her in her hour of need? Or will they be by her side till the end?

*Warning: contains death and language*

Find out in “My Last Goodbye”


3. Something's Wrong



Louis’s POV
My date with Eleanor was going great. She’s such a great girl and she has a good sense of humour like me. We were going to head back to mine and watch a film or something. She then noticed the “Kick me” note on my back.

“God my mates are hilarious” I sarcastically said. She giggled at my comment.

“Don’t be so hard on them. It was funny” We got back to my house where I saw everyone else watching the hangover.

“What are you guys doing here?” I asked.

“Mia had another bad migraine so we decided to hang out here” said Zayn, I turned to Mia and looked at her with concern.

“How you feeling now Mia?” I asked. She was all wrapped up in a blanket next to Zayn who was cuddling her.

“It still hurts but not as bad as it was. How come you two are here?”

“I brought Eleanor back here cause we were going to watch the film just the two of us”. I was kind of hinting that me and Eleanor wanted to be alone.

“Why can’t we all watch another film together?” asked Harry. “Or are you two up to something?” He raised his eyebrow. He was being such a arse at the moment.

“I don’t mind watching a film with you guys” said Eleanor, polietly.

“We can always go to the cinema sometime next week?” I whispered into her ear. She smiled and nodded at me. We took our seats and we began to watch “Toy Story 3”.



After a few laughs and tears later Toy Story 3 ended and it was time for Eleanor to go. She had school work to do which I couldn't keep her from.

“See you tomorrow at school guys” she said as she got up to leave.

“You should hang out with us tomorrow” suggested Mia. Eleanor smiled and nodded in agreement. I then showed her the way out.

“I had a really good day today thanks” said Eleanor. I smiled at her comment, feeling butterflies in my stomach.

“Yeah same here. We should do it again sometime” I suggested.

“Yeah we should” she smiled. We the stood there and looked into each other’s eyes. We both then began to lean forward. Our lips were so close. I leaned in a little further and we did it. We kissed. It felt amazing. Her lips were so soft and gentle. We both pulled away and grinned. “See you tomorrow”. She then winked at me and walked off. I shut the door and I couldn’t help but smile. I walked back into the living room and everyone was looking at me.

“What?” I exclaimed. They all sniggered.

“We saw you two kiss” smirked Niall. Crap they did? “So you two out then?”

“Umm not yet but I’ll ask her tomorrow” I said, I really did like her and wanted to become more than friends.

“We best be getting back. We’ve got that assignment due in tomorrow for Mrs Johnson” moaned Zayn. Crap we did and all.

“Yeah. She’ll kill us if we don’t” added Harry. We all sighed and agreed. We send goodbye to lads before it was then just me and Mia. Mia is like my little sister. I’ve always looked after her since she began to live with us. She is my family and my best friend; well more like a sister to me.



Mia’s POV
“I’m home” I heard Jay shout. Jay was Louis’s mum and my guardian. She has been a mother figure to me for almost 9 years.

“We’re in here mum” shouted Louis. Me and Louis for the past 2 hours have been trying to complete our assignment for tomorrow and we managed to finish.

“How has your day been loves?” asked Jay. She put on the table 3 bags of shopping and started to put it away.

“It’s been great. Louis got a date with a girl” I teased. Louis shot me a death look.

“Awww Louis” said Mum. “How did it go?”

“It went fine thanks” said Louis. He looked so annoyed that I told her, but I couldn't help but giggle.

“That’s good what about you Mia?” Jay asked.

“Yeah my day was good. I hung out with the lads here and watched a couple of films” I said.

“Also mum she got another bad migraine” added Louis. Jay then turned to look at me with a worried look in her eyes.

“How bad was it love?” asked Jay, walking over to me and placing her hands on my shoulder.

“Worst it’s been” I sighed. Jay sighed, I could see that she was concerned with me.


“I’ll ring the GP tomorrow to arrange an appointment” she said. I smiled at her. Jay has been such an amazing guardian to me. It’s only me, Louis and Jay who live here. Louis’s dad Mark ran away before Louis was born. He hasn’t contacted them since. But we’re okay just the 3 of us.




Later that night before I went to sleep another migraine came. It was worst that my other one. My head was hurting so much and my vision was really blurry. I got up and stumbled into the bathroom. Which I then threw up, I split the contents of my entire stomach into the toilet.

After 5 minutes of pain it all went away. I made my way back to bed to try and get some sleep. My migraines are never normally like this.

The next morning I woke up and I wasn’t in much pain. I had a little headache but that’s it. I got up and went to tell Jay about last night’s incident. She looked worried so she called the GP straight away. The earliest appointment I got was tomorrow morning. Better than nothing. I got dressed into my school uniform and walked with Louis to school.

We got to the school gates and I saw Harry, Liam, Zayn and Niall sitting on the steps. When they saw us they got up and hugged us.

“Hey guys so did you get the assignment done?” asked Liam.

“Yeah took us 2 hours” moaned Louis.

“I think I just made most of it up” laughed Harry. Then the school bell rang. We are all in the same lessons together. We had English first and we had to hand in our assignments. I sat next to Zayn. I then explained to him about last night’s incident.

“Mum’s arranged an appointment with the doctor tomorrow. What if it’s really bad Zayn?” I asked. I was getting so wound up about it.

“It won’t be Mia. You’ll be fine” said Zayn. He was only saying it to cheer me up and to reassure me that everything was okay. But from what’s been happening to me; it isn’t normal and there is something wrong.

It was now lunch time and we all made our sat in our usually space. We always sat underneath a tree. It was a shady place and no one would bother us. We were on our own. Eleanor joined us today as Louis invited her. We were all having a good laugh. I think Eleanor should hang out with us more often. We then heard the bell ring so we all got up to go to form. Just as I got up I felt something drip out of my nose.

“Your nose is bleeding Mia” pointed out Harry. I wiped my hand and saw the blood on it. Then a sharp, powerful pain came to my head.

“Oww” I screamed. I held my hand to my head, hoping the pain would go away.

“Mia what’s wrong?” asked Zayn. I then felt my knees give way and I landed on the floor. Then everything went black.

Zayn’s POV
I saw Mia scream in pain while she was putting her hand on her head.

“Mia what’s wrong?” I asked. Her knees then gave way and she fell to the floor and started to have an epileptic seizure (known as a fit). Me and Louis rushed by her side. “Mia stays with us Mia. Call an ambulance. Get a teacher. Do something”. I almost screamed. There was no response from her. She just kept shaking violently. I saw Liam and Niall run inside the school to get a teacher while Harry called an ambulance.

“Mia please stays with us” said Louis. Eleanor bent down to comfort Louis. Tears were starting to come down his face. She then stopped shaking and closed her eyes. Her body was still. “Mia?” There was no response. She can’t die now. I then heard the sound of ambulance sirens. 2 people in paramedic uniform rushed over to us. Me and Louis backed off while they seed to Mia. Liam and Niall came back with the head teacher.

“What’s happened?” asked Mr Mckenzie.

“She’s had a seizure and we need to get her to hospital immediately; who’s coming?” asked one of the paramedics. Me and Louis both looked at each other.

“You go Louis” I said. Louis nodded and hopped into the back of the ambulance. I watched them as they put Mia onto a trolley and put her into the ambulance. This can’t be happening. Why her?


I then watched as the ambulance drove away. Please be okay Mia. I can’t lose you.

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