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11. Tears of the sky by Potterjay

Very impressive peom. The end did make up for the beginning.. It was well thought about, witha double meaning possibly?

The rain and sky being a girls heartbroken tears and how eventually they move on because life does move on, but hat they will always care and memories will always be there.

 

Overall I really like this poem and I would recomend it!!

5/5

 

-The Escapist.

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