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14. Shattered and Decisions by Love2write

Shattered

This poem has a well kept structure and is very directed at pain.

Very good and interesting.

I suggest to make it rhyme to create the poetic atmosphere.

 

4/5

 

Decisions

I really enjoyed read this one!

This is easy to relate with and was full of emotion.

 

Keep on writing!

5/5

 

-The Escapist

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