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9. Freedom by B.Anonymous

Very good Movella! The introduction really lures you in. It really shows emotion in the first chapter.

The only issue there is, is the punctuation, but overall it was a well written piece. :)

 

Keep on writing!!

Rating: 4/5

 

-The Escapist

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