Coma Girl <3

Rachel and her besties are massive directioners, they've been crazy about the 5 boys since X-factor. When she hears One Direction are coming to Eastfield Arena, she gets her tickets and goes. Maybe everything will go perfectly as she wished... Or not...

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3. This isn't good...

I sprinted out the car, and barged through crowds of crazy fans and leapt. I turned to make sure Chip and Shiz were behind me and they were. "Ray, take it easy." Chip gasped. "Yeah okay, I'm just trying." I smiled. I looked at Shiz and hugged her. "C'mon girls" They followed my lead as I raced across the entrance. I realized they would be at the car-park to avoid crowds (I read that in a mag). So I led my friends to the back of the block which (hopefully) might be where 1D will be. So, I raced to the other side of the road carelessly. I stopped. I heard wild screams, I turned my head and saw a dark black car with tinted windows. The bright headlights made me go dizzy. Everything stopped. I was in the middle of the road, scared. My heart skipped a beat. "Beeeeep!" 

*Blackout*

I hear all these sirens and crying. I cant see anything but pitch black. Then I hear a familiar voice, "Ray, baby" My mother sobbed. I cant see anything but I want to tell her I'm okay. What happened? No one can hear me, Am I stuck like this forever? I hear boots knocking against the floor, I assume its a nurse, "Hello are you the mother of this young girl?" She asks, I can imagine her. A tall lady with dark hair, very pretty. "Yeah" I mother says weakly. "Well I'm afraid your daughter has got coma..." What? Coma? Is it when your stuck in your sleep forever? Am I going to die? How did this all happen? The last thing I can remember is bright lights, a wild crowd cheering and well One Direction. Did something happen? "Hello my name is Tracy.I'm going to be your daughters personal nurse, I will keep record of any progress and inform you as soon as possible if anything happens. Also I will make sure she is well clean and fed." Tracy says to my mother. Aw Tracy's nice. But I don't want to be stuck like this. I want to go home. I wanna spend the rest of the summer with my best friends. I wanna see One Direction. But I obviously cant. My voice is nothing. I keep wishing I could replay this day. Start Over. All I see is dark, hollow, empty black. Nothing but black. I feel so alone, lonely. I can feel my heart break inside me and it hurts more than ever. I hear footsteps getting loader, closer to me.

"Rachel. Its Dad. Chelsea and Sharline with me. They begged to come so, yeah. I'll be here for you when you wake up remember that" He said. "Rachel! I'm so sorry, I know you can wake up, your a very strong girl. And I'll do whatever it takes to make it happen. I promise." This isn't your fault Chip stop blaming yourself. I feel so bad, now because of my stupid actions I've hurt my family and it caused my mates to blame themselves for it. Ugh. I am just better of dead. I mean my parents made me by mistake, I stopped until I felt somebody hold my left hand. It was very cold. Whoever it was they better have permission to touch me or else when I do wake up they'll be laying on this hospital bed instead. "Rachel," It was Shiz, I can recognize her voice from a mile away, I felt a wet tear drop on my face. Was she crying? "Your a sister to me, and when you get hurt I do too. Please, I beg you, just remember that I love you. I don't really care how weird or perverted that sounds but you really do mean a lot to me, I mean you were always there to help, you always would cheer me up, even on the saddest days of life. Now its time for me to repay you, I'll be here for you to make sure you wake up. And I know you will because you are the most amazing person ever. Your someone everybody wants to be." 

 

 

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