When i Wish Upon a Star Sequal

This Is a Sequal Of My First Fanfiction , When i Wish Upon a Star. After a Terriable Tragedy Happend To Louis And Now Mackenzie Is Just Now Starting To Get Her Memory Back.. What Will Later Find Out Is How This Will All Summon Up. What Will Happen? Read It To Find Out..

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3. The Early Birthday Date

Mackenzie's P.O.V-- It Was 7:30 And The Limo Driver Had Made It To Our Flat. i Hopped Ito The Limo And The Driver Heade To a Destination i've Never Went to. It's Out Of Doncaster. i Was Started To Get Worried. So i texted Louis Again.

To LouBear, Where Is This Limo Driver Taking Me??

I Sent The Message Only a Few Seconds Past and Louis Messaged Back.

From LouBear, You'll See.. Just Wait Trust Me, Ok? You''ll Love Me After you See The Sight. Promise Me.

i Looked Out The Window And Noticed a Bunch Of Water Surrounding Me. But It Was Only Minutes Later When We Arrived At The Destionation. It Was Just As i Dreamed It, The Beach When We Can See The Sunset Go Down, And i See Louis Near A Table Set For Two. And Candles Surrounding It. I Ran Up To Him And He Catched Me And We Kissed. "Oh My- Louis It's Beautiful.." i Say Speechless. "i Knew You Would Love Me For It..' Hes Says Romantic Like. i Kissed Him Again. And He Pointed To The Table. "Shall We Eat My Dear?" He Said Romanticly. He Gladly Pulled The Chair Out For Me, And He Sat Across From me and Sat Down. He Served Our Favorite Food. Pizza. We Were Having a Amzaing Time Together Here Alone, Under The Moonlight, The Sunset Going Down And Everything Was Just .... You Know ... Perfect. He Took My Hand and Said : I've Got a Early Birthday Girft Suprise For You.." i Smiled and Say " Is This Already Enough Louis.." i Say " Close Your Eyes Babe." He Tells Me. i Closed Them And He Gladly Got Out Of His Chair And He Stood In Front Of Me Grabing a Hold Of My hand " Ok Babe, Open Your Eyes Now.." He Says i Slowly Open Them And Saw Him Kneeled On One Knee And Having a Small Box In One Hand. " Mackenzie, As Much As i Did All Of This For you And Many Other Things And Mostly Importantly Our Love And You know That i Would Do Anything For you And Fight For Us, And Our Love and i Dont Want to Lose You Again From Anyone, i Want you To Be Mine So... Will You Gladly Be Mrs. Tomlinson?... Will You Marry Me?" He Says Slowly He Opend The Box Which Reveled a Beautiful Dimand Ring. i Was Sitting There Speechless On What to Say. "Oh My.. Louis Yes!! Yes!! i Will Be Mrs. Tomlinson!! Yes!! " i Jumped and Hugged Him And He Took My Left Hand And Put the Dimand Ring On My Finger and We Kissed With Fireworks I  the Background Which Read, Louis + Makenzie Tomlinson = Love Forever <3 . For the Rest Of The Night We Layed On The Shore Louis Arms Around My Body Warming me Up, Since i Was Cold. And In The Background Played 'How To Save a Life' By The Fray. And i Heard Louis Singing  It In My Ear And i Slowly Fell Alseep While Listening To His Beautiful Singing, And A Smile On My Face Thinking Now Louis Is Going To be My Husband and Always Will Be With Me Till We Die.

A/N: Louis Proposed! Aww How Sweet! Who Agrees? Have Any Ideas On What should Happen next? - Kenzie Tommo xx.

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