Are You The One?

This story unfolds about a girl name Mackenzie that moves to a private school. She met these 5 unbelievably cute guys that were called One Direction. The leader of the group, Harry Styles, was the meanest of them all and would "bully" Mackenzie. She soon get to know these boys and gets close to one of them. When she first met them, Niall was the one who caught her eyes first. As the story continues, she soon realizes "Is he really the one?"...

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24. Comma

Narrator POV: 

    Niall was on the street right before arriving at Mackenzie 's neighborhood. He was so caught up in his thinking he didn't notice there was a red light. All he saw was his car crashing head first into another car. He stepped on the brake as hard and fast as possible but it didn't help. The metal of both cars creaked. Niall was knocked out by the impact. The ambulance was called, Niall was rushed to the hospital. He was still alive but nobody knew for how much longer. He was very short on blood and was bruised up very badly. The person in the other car did not make it...

Harry's POV:

  We had just arrived back at Mackenzie's house when I got a phone call. The number was unknown, so I wasn't sure if I should pick up, but something told me I should. "Hello?" "Hello, this is Frank Rodgers, Niall's doctor. I have called to inform you that Niall is in a comma." "What?" "This is Harry Styles, right?" "Uh uh yes" Mackenzie looked at me worriedly. "Who is it?" she mouthed to me. I put the phone on speaker. "Could you please explain what happened Doctor?" "Well as far as I know Niall was in a car accident. He ran a red light and hit another car head on. Uh the person in the other didn't make it..Niall is in a comma. You are very lucky he didn't die from the impact. He lost almost a gallon of blood. His skull is fractured and he has a broken arm. I suggest you visit him as soon as possible. His room extension number is: 232677. I wish the best for Niall, have a..good evening, sir." My head was spinning. This couldn't be happening. No not to Niall, not now. I looked up at Mackenzie, she stared at me blankly. "Get in the car" she said. "What?" I replied. "GET IN THE CAR, HARRY!" We ran outside and I started the engine.

Mackenzie's POV:

  The car ride home was silent. No one spoke, no one wanted to. We finally had gotten home when Harry got a phone call. His face became ghostly pale, his eyes were full of fear. I mouthed "Who is it?" to him. He set the phone on his knee and put it on speaker. "Could you please explain what happened Doctor?" He said, his voice was monotone. The doctor explained that Niall was in a...a..a comma. How could this possibly be happening. I stared up at Harry blankly and in a low voice said "Get in the car" He looked at me puzzled, like if the words I spoke were in another language. "GET IN THE CAR, HARRY!" I shouted. We needed to get to the hospital as soon as possible. We ran to the car and Harry started the engine. I couldn't believe what was happening. Just a couple of hours ago me and Harry both were furious at Niall. He had been such a jerk lately. I started to think about all the times I spent with Niall. When suddenly Harry interrupted my train of thoughts. I guess it was for the better. If I started to think about Niall and everything that had happened since I got here from New York I would burst out crying. He said "Can you call the boys and tell them what happened?" I wasn't sure what to do I don't think I could bear telling them. I looked at Harry hoping he would understand. He looked at me and shook his head. "Please...?" I grabbed my phone reluctantly and dialed  Zayn's number. "Hey?" he said. I heard Perrie's laugh echo in the background. I hung up the phone. I tried not to feel mad or sad or anything like that. But I couldn't tell Zayn while Perrie was there I just couldn't. "Try again, please." Harry urged. I dialed to call Louis. "Hey!" I didn't reply. "Hello?" Louis said. "N-n-n-Niall's in a comma" I stuttered out. "What?" His voice was serious. I've never heard him so concerned before. I hung up the phone and tossed it on the floor. I put my knees up and started to cry. I couldn't bear it. Niall's in a comma and the last words I said to him were "Niall I don't need this right now" I do need him now. I need my goofy bestfriend back. Not just back from his comma, I need him back. I want him to not hate me anymore. I want him to accept me and Harry's relationship and be my bestfriend again.     

 

     

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