When We Met

Geby and Louis go on a date, on the way home Geby has a flash back of when she first met Louis...
p.s Geby is pronouced Gabby, short for Gebrielle


4. the picnic

We drive to a park near our hotel. We lay out the picnic rug again eat dinner and then star gaze. I was laying with my head on Louis chest and my arm hugging him. While he was playing with my hair.

He sits up and searches for something in the basket.

'What are you looking for?'

'Ah... Nothing....’

'Um... Okay then.'

He grabs something and put it in his pocket.

He stands up and offers his hand and I grab it as we stand up.


'Geby Charlotte McConville. I love you with all of my heart. You are the most beautiful person I have ever met inside and out. The last year has been the most amazing year of my life. You for fill me Geby. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. In saying that. Will you Gabrielle Charlotte McConville marry me?' He gets down on one knee and opens up a box revealing a beautiful diamond ring.

'Are you serious?!'

'Ah... Yes? So....’

'Oh, sorry yes!!'

 He stands up as I jump on him wrapping my arm around him. We kiss passionately.


I can’t stop looking at my ring. He carries me to the car and on the way home I fall asleep as I was tired and it was getting late. I dream of how we first met. This is how the story goes…..

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