#TargetGirl [Harry and Liam FanFic] [COMPLETED]

Ally Khrystn enjoys her job @ Target.
Getting into work late. Stacking albums...
But a 'Battle of the Bands' display is up @ Target between The Wanted and One Direction and the boys from 1D just can't help themselves, so they go and check out the sales.
Ally, unbeknowist to their plan tells a disguised Harry that he's a pervert.
Later on, Harry tweets about an elusive #TargetGirl which gets the media buzzing about who she is and if Taylor Swift and Harry Styles are still together....
Liam, brokenhearted from Danielle, comes up with a plan to get her back...
But everything back fires as he falls for #TargetGirl
What does a girl do, when 2 of 1D are after her heart???
And to make matters more interesting she has a crush on her cousin... But then it's understandable when you find out who he is? A clue... He's British and also in a band. What will happen when another falls for the Wyatt heiress??
Read and find out
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33. Working the TOMLINSON Charm


Ally’s POV


We’ve been driving for ten minutes and I was really having fun with Lou.

‘Little Things’ had come on and were singing along to it.

The private concert by Louis was perfect and I didn’t think I could’ve fallen in love more with the song but I did.

Suddenly I heard a siren form behind us.

“What’s that?” I asked.

“Probably a fire,” Lou guessed.

“You sure?”

He nodded.

Again I heard a siren but now it was clear it wasn’t a fire.

It was a police car chasing us.

“TOMLINSON!” I screamed.

“What? What?” he screamed after jumping a bit.

“Stop the car,” I ordered.

“Why?” he asked. “We’re about two blocks from home.”

He clearly hadn’t noticed the police car behind us, flashing its lights for us to pull over.

“A bloody popo is behind us,” I growled.

“Blimey hell,” he hissed. “Really?”

“Uh-huh. Now pull over. He’s already pissed.

After sighing Louis pulled over to the side of the road.

The police officer took what felt like a century to get from his car to ours. And in this ‘century’ Lou was freaking out.

“I haven’t’ been pulled over before,” he shrieked. “What do I do? What do I do?”

“Just relax. Don’t freak out,” I said.

The officer finale came over.

He was a scrawny man. His hair was cut in an army issued haircut and he looked so young in his uniform that he looked like a teenager playing dress up.

He shone a flashlight at us even though it was freaking daylight.

“Morning officer,” Lou said in a calm voice like he hadn’t been freaking out a second ago. 

“Morning sir,” the officer said as he looked over at a book that might probably be a manual on how to handle speedsters. “Have you been drinking today?”

“Of course,” Louis replied. I was, of course surprised at his honesty. “I drink everyday or else I’m gonna die.”

“What did you drink?” the officer asked, still reading his ‘manual’.

“Oh, let’s see,” Louis thought it over, “I think I drank a lot today. This morning I had a good cuppa warm tea like mom used to make. Then a glass of coke… No, make that... two glasses of coke. Then oh, yeah. A glass of water…” he sassed.

I stifled my laugh.

Louis was sassing him.

Finally the officer looked up, his face brimming with anger.

“Listen mister. Don’t get sassy with me. You were doing a 80 in a 70 zone,” he snapped.

“You sure?” Louis asked as he took off his glasses.

“Yeah. You w-” recognition flashed in his eyes. “Wait,” he muttered. “You’re… You’re...” he couldn’t quite fathom any words.

Lou held out his hand.

“Louis Tomlinson kind sir. How do you do?”

The officer was smiling form ear to ear as he shook Lou’s hand.

“Great… great Mr. Tomlinson,” he replied, losing all hostility that he might have had.

“What’s you name, kind sir?”

Lou was playing his cards perfectly.

“Jake. Jacob Weatherby,” the guy replied.

“Well, Jacob you see, I don’t want any trouble today. What about ya?” Louis asked.

Jacob nodded; hanging on Lou’s every word.

“Anything I can do for you?” Lou asked.

“The officer smiled as he asked, “One picture?”

Louis nodded.

“Oh and an autograph please,” he added. “Me daughter’s a huge fan.”

Louis nodded as he smiled at me victoriously.

“Ally, ya got a pen?” he asked.

“Uh… sure do,” I said as I rummaged my bag for it.

“Excuse me,” Jacob said as he eyed me for the first time. “But are you Alisha Wyatt?”

I was stunned that he recognized me but nodded anyway.

“Can I get your photo and autograph too Ms. Wyatt. Daughter’s also a huge fan.”

I smiled.

“Sure thing Jake,” I said as Louis and I both got out of the car and took pictures with Officer Weatherby.

“Thank you Weatherby,” Louis said. “We have to go now. The lads are waiting.”

“Yeah sure thing Mr. Tomlinson,” Jacob said.

“Please call me Louis,” Lou said.


“Oh wait…” I muttered. “Just hold on Jake. I need to talk to Lou for a bit.”

I grabbed a confused Louis and pulled him to the side.

“When’s you next London concert?” I asked.

“In two weeks,” he replied. “Why?”

“Put me down for three tickets and send them to Jake and his family. ‘Kay?”

“Okay. That’s a good thing Ally,” Lou smiled at me.

Then we headed back over to Jake.

“Jake,” I started.

“Yes?” he asked as he straightened his already straightened uniform.

“Can we have your address?” Louis asked, always getting straight to the point.


“Well,” I began. “I’ve gotten you and your family three tickets to the band concert in two weeks. Do you want them?”

Jake stared at us, waiting for someone to say, ‘GOTCHA!’

Finally he asked, “Really?”

I nodded.


“YES!” he exclaimed. “Yes… yes please. That would be marvellous. Simply marvellous.”


Finally Jacob gave us his contact details and address.

“Great,” Louis said. “Someone will bring it over tomorrow or the day after. There’ll be back stage passes included so we can meet your daughter.”

After receiving countless hugs and ‘thank yous’ from him we got into the car and headed back to Lou’s apartment.



Hey stylies,

What did you think of this book so far?

What do you think will happen when she gets to the apartment?

Anyways, so this update was to celebrate the new year oh and also to remember it.

Like you know I'll say 'oh so this is what I did on the first'

So yeah... Anyways this book is about to finish and then I'll start with the sequel...

Please remember to 'like' and 'favorite'  if you haven't already but you love this book...

#TG all the wayy...

Oh and congratsz to Niall, Zayn and Harry who were trending on Twitter today... Y'all deserve it...

iLy One Direction...

They are just so awesome...

I'm totally fangirling right now...

Anyways THIS IS 2013!!! Can't believe it...


HeyLoQueeKayy1D <3

P.S----> can't wait for 'Kiss You' video... Am so in love with that song <3

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