Free Fall

This is a re-make of the first Free Falling. It was with this I won a comp at school. Hope you like it!
Kaye is your average shy teenager. Surrounded by friends, semi-popular, finally getting attention from the boy she fancies, she's happy. However, things start to change. Her best friends have turned on her, started calling her names, and it's not long before the ghosts of her past start to catch up with her future.....


3. Submerged


It  felt amazing. I was in free fall. It felt like I could fly. I was glad that the jump would be one of the last thing I experienced. Then I hit the sea and was pulled under.


My life flashed before my eyes. I saw every moment I had experienced in my life. My holy communion. When Dad died in a car crash. The grief after. Mam barely coping, her falling into a state of depression. Meeting Jordan. Being picked on. Being depressed.


Then  I realized. Why did I let them win? All they were were childish bullies. I was stronger than them. I should have told someone!


And with that revelation came sadness and regret. It was too late to turn back time. I was going to die, drown whether I liked it or not. I could already feel my insides screaming for me to get a breath.

Suddenly, a miracle occurred. My head popped up from the sea. I severely welcomed breath. However, I couldn't stay up forever. I could already feel my muscles tiering. I wanted to cry but I didn't have the energy.


Then, a second miracle. Just as I was fading out of consciousness, I felt sturdy arms grip me and pull me out of the water.  A lone fisherman saving my life. Then I was out.

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