Falling For Two * A Jack and Finn Harries Love Story"

I had a idea to write a story about these two popular youtubers from England after i saw their videos on youtube. I thought what would happen if a girl on a trip to England met on of these guys and started dating him and then met his brother and started to like him also and they both begun competing for her love. Who would she pick? The funny, loveable Jack? Or the laid back romantic Finn? Well this is that story. Who would you pick? Who will she pick?


10. The Date

As we continued to drive down a long twisty road we were stopped by a cop. Uh oh i thought to myself, we serious could not be getting a ticket Finn wasnt driving that fast was he? "Just  relax." He says to me as he turn the car off and rolls down the window. "Is there a problem, sir?" he asks

"You cant go through this way this way is closed you have to go back the way you came in."

Oh no. Our date hasn't even started and now it is ruined. Whatever Finn had planned for me it wouldn't happen. "No sir you dont understand i have to go this way."

"Well i'm sorry son you cant."

"Is there another way around?"

"I'm not sure" The cop shurgs and walks away. Finn lets our a frustrated breath and slowly back up and turns around. I can tell he is very upset, I mean so was I. I, as well as him was looking forward to this date and it pretty much as been blown to smithereens. I wanted to say something anything to let him know that even though we may not go on this date today that anytime i did get to spend with him was good enough for me.  As if he heard my thoughts he shook his head and said "No"

" Im sorry?"

"We will have this date." He pulls into a restaurant and unsnaps his seat belt " One moment im gonna ask for directions."

"Really? i thought guys never ask for directions?" I joke trying to lighten the mood up and get a smile out of him. Finn turns to look at me and exits the car. Well that plan didnt work out.


Two mintues past and no sign of Finn. Just when i was about to get worried my cell phone rings "Hello?"

"Anneliese, can you come in here for a bit."
"Why is something wrong?" i ask but my response was met with a dead dial tone. Confused, i leave the car and head into the restaurant. I pull the door open and walk in. The restaurant was pitch black. I call out into the darkness "Hello? Finn?" Just then the lights shut on and standing before me in Finn in a tuxedo with a rose in his hand and smile upon his face. " Omg" i said " What?" I look around and in the middle of the floor is a single candle light table just for him and me. " Finn" i said giggling and smiling all at the same time 

He walks to me and hands me the rose. "Are you impressed?"

I nod and say "Very impressed." The swinging doors from the kitchen open and in walks the waiter who i immediately recognize "Your the cop that stopped us"

" I like to go by Finn's older cousin but today. Im your waiter. Right this way. By the way, dude, You owe 100 pounds for stealing my dads uniform. He will gut me if he finds out." He looks at me and smiles and leads us to our table  

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