Falling For Two * A Jack and Finn Harries Love Story"

I had a idea to write a story about these two popular youtubers from England after i saw their videos on youtube. I thought what would happen if a girl on a trip to England met on of these guys and started dating him and then met his brother and started to like him also and they both begun competing for her love. Who would she pick? The funny, loveable Jack? Or the laid back romantic Finn? Well this is that story. Who would you pick? Who will she pick?


9. The Beginning

"Are you seriously eating Cheerios with no milk?" I said with a smile and a chuckle as i watched Jack on my computer screen. We have been chatting through Skype for the past few minute. He had messaged me but then i got another text message which was coincidentally his brother so he said he could text me but he wants something better, he wanted to see me. So here we are  skyping in our pj's, me having a fruit salad for breakfast and him eating dry Cheerios out of a bowl. " I like my cereal with no milk, believe it or not" he said scooping more up and plopping it into his mouth "Mmmm" he said with a smile and chewing it. I shook my head in laughter "You are so weird" i replied biting my strawberry.

"I'm not weird i'm a limited edition" he said

" You are far from limited cause there is another one of you. I'm limited edition"

He shrugged and chuckled "Your right, your right. You are there is only one Anne. And she belongs to me " He said with a smile. I looked down and smirked a bit. Whenever he said things like that i found that i could not make eye contact not now anyways before when i thought i was just seeing him it was easier. I knew who i wanted to  be with, belong to, commit too. But now, i wasn't sure. My thoughts were soon interrupted by a phone call. "Jack, can you hold on for one moment please?"

"Take your time, I've got Cheerios" he said holding up his bowl and continued to eat. I stood up and walked into my bathroom and answered the call "Hello?"


"Finn. Hi."

" How are you?" he asked?

"Um," peeking my head out of the bathroom and looking at the screen i saw Jack still sitting there. I retreated back inside and closing the door " I am great how are you?"

"I'm well. Um, i was just calling to see if maybe you would like to go out with me today?"

"Um sure yeah i guess that would be fun, where too?"
" I don't really know." he said "I just" he took a paused and exhaled and continue to speak " Really wanna see you today."

I couldn't help but smile. These guys were not making things easy for me. If i had to chose who i wanted right now I probably wouldn't even chose. My head felt like a blunder on the fastest speed with all the emotions and choices and my dad and this new baby all of these things swirling around and around and around it's amazing i could even remember how to function during the day. I looked into the mirror at myself trying to see what it was they were seeing, to them there has to be something remarkable to make them agree with seeing me at the same time but to me? I don't see anything different, I'm not beautiful like my sister or gorgeous like Blair so what else it? Why me?

"Anneliese?" Finn said calling out to me and bringing me out of my own thoughts and back to reality. "I'm here. Um yeah sure  Finn i would love too going out today. Give me 30 mins?"

" Really!" he said with excitement into his voice.

I laughed and replied "Ow, Finn that was my ear you know i need this." He apologized and said he would come and pick me up from my home. I said okay and hung up and then remember. I was video chatting with his brother. I opened the door and walked back out and sat down. "Jack."

He looked up and the look in his eyes said he already knew about my date with Finn. "I already know. I heard him shout." I looked down and tugged my hair back behind my ear and mustered a apology "Please don't be mad but you guys agreed to this, this was your idea not mine"

"So it's my fault now?"

"Jack i never said that"

" It's my fault my brother tricked you into believing he was me and liking you?"

"Jack,  no no of course not it's no ones fault"

"I hope you have fun on your date."


Jack stops and looks at me through the screen. I raised my hand up and placed it on the screen and Jack does the same. We stay in the position for a few minutes smiling.


After i said goodbye to Jack i get ready for my date with Finn not sure what we were gonna do or go. I went simple a Belstaff Crawley black turtle neck jumper, paired with AG Red Adriano Goldschmied leggins black Slouchy side Buckle boots and a Burberry London Vyner Wool Charcoal Pea Coat. I pulled my hair back into a Ponytail and gave myself a once over in the mirror. Yeah, i thought to myself, this should be okay not to dressy. I was ready for anything. I grabbed my phone and placed it in my pocket and walked outside and stood by the gate for Finn. About 6 mins later he arrived in a mini cooper. I waved and smiled and walked to the car and got in " Wow, Anneliese you look amazing" He said pulling me into a hug. I thanked him and replied with a "You do too"

"But i just have one request"

"What's that?"

He reaches behind my head and released my hair from it ponytail "Wear your hair down" he said caressing my cheek so gently it sends a shiver down my spine "You look so beautiful with it down"

I would from that day on any date i had with Finn i would purposely wear my hair up just so he would release it and caress my cheek again

"Ready?" he asked starting the car up


And we were off

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