Heres A Tip

Brooklyn was an ordinary girl. Noting special. She was still in school and she was struggling to pay for her self after her mom passed away. It was just her dad and herself and her little brother Carter. One day she has a few special guests visit her at her job Subway. When one of them slips their phone number in the tip bin she cant believe it and she doesnt.


2. Call Me

 Niall POV

     After we got home I took out the picture Brooklyn and I had took and just smiled. As I looked at her I noticed all her features. Her dirty blonde hair that has a little natural wave, her hazel green eyes that were just mesmirzing, and her adorable smile. She was just so beautiful. I also noticed a few of her flaws like the crinkles by her eyes ( O my gosh now Im just copying our song )


I hoped she had recieved the note I attached to the 10 dollar bill I gave her. Yes I gave her a ten dollar bill its all I had!

Brooklyn POV

     I went to collect the tips grabbing it out of the jar with fancy bubble letters on it. I started to walk hime and count the money. I had a couple of fives but mostly ones and extra spare change. I looked at the last dollar I had and it was a 10 dollar. Iv'e never gotten this much before. Attached to the 10 dollar was a note. I looked at the note and it read: 

     Call Me!! 555-6785 - Nialler x 

    I smiled down at the paper also stunned he wrote that. I slipped the note in my pocket after entering it into my contacts. I didn't have a lot of contacts because I wasn't the most popular girl out there.... but I was proud when I had one of the guys from the most famous boy band in my contacts. I was so excited and I just couldn't hold it in. I had to tell someone. I looked in my contacts and found my best friend Riley. I decided to text her.

   To Riley :) : Hey guess who I just met at work?

   From Riley :) : Who?

     I sent her the picture of Niall and I. To Riley :) : One Direction!!!

   From Riley :) : I'm Coming Over...!!! 

     I couldn't wait to see her. I rushed home. When I walked in the doorway there was a note on the door saying " Carter and I have left for the week hope you dont mind I LOVE U!!!! - Dad" I felt sad as read that not being invited to do whatever but I just kept walking. I was so excited. After about 10 minutes of almost screaming my head off I heard a knock on the door. I opened it and saw Riley. She was smiling very wildely and she just looked like a bundle of joy, She was dressed in her purple penguin footsies. 

     "So.. Tell me all about it!!!" she said inviting herself in. 

     "One second I have to change out of these clothes," She looked upset as I ran to go put on my coca - cola pajamas. I went back in the living room to see Riley checking her twitter looking as if she's about to explode. "Why so happy?" I asked her. 

     "Have you not seen?" she asked showing me a post from Niall Horan on twitter. It said : 

     Just got an amazing sandwhich at the Subway. Met an awesome girl there!! - Nialler x 

     Also uploaded was the picture of us. I couldn't help but smile. 

     "Ok, so now tell me what happened!!!!" she bugged. I told her everything from the picture to the tip. "Are you gonna call him?" she asked her eyes widening every second. 

     "Ya," I told her. I mean who wouldn't. 

     "Ok so call right now!" she yelled. 

     "No, I dont wanna sound desperate," I replied. After about 30 minutes of arguing I finally agreed. I was a little nervous but I picked up my phone and dialed. It rang about 4 times before it was picked up.

     "Hello?" I heard him say with his thick irish accent.


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