Eternal love (a 1D fan fic)

So Caity is a 18 year old girl who has just finished high school and is moving to London with her 4 friends, Jorden, Phoebe, Caitlyn and Jade. they each have their own little love story that add together but who will fall for who in this story of love, and what twist of fate lay around the corner.


9. hello there


 "Hey Caitlin what are you guys doing here?" He asked. I was so shocked to see Louis here.  And the other 4 the girls came running to the door and  gasped. " Hey," was all  any of the others managed to choke out.

" hey Lou, um...... we live here, what about you?" I asked him. He  had an even more shocked look on his face.

" Umm.....  We live next door. We heard you guys singing. You have really good voices." He replied. Now it  was my turn to be shocked. Before I could tell him and the boys that we had to leave, Niall piped," Can we come in?" 

" Sure," Jade answered.

" We need to go shopping though we've just got tap water," I reminded them. Jade's heart must have sunk. I cold tell by the expression on her face. 

" Why don't you come over to our house for the night. or just for dinner. Whatever you prefer," Liam said being a gentleman. And then we all had happy expressions and so did the boys.

 " Oh but I still need to go to the shops," I said.

" I'll take you," Louis offered," I said yes and grabbed my bag. The other girls went over to the boys house.

" Let's take my car," Louis offered and led me to the spot where he had parked his car. It was a awesome car. I can't even describe it. Louis walked up to the car door and opened it while saying " Your chariot awaits my lady." I smiled at him and he smiled back. As I climbed in, I caught a glimpse of myself in the side view mirrors. " Crud," I exclaimed. My hair was still messy from my sleep, my clothes were crumpled and my light make up looked smudged. " What?" Louis asked me, his eyes full of  concern. " my appearance," I answered and he just laughed and said," I think you look cute." I smiled as his kindness gave me a warm sensation  and my cheeks go red. " Too late I already took my make up off before you told me, with a wipe, and am currently  fixing up my hair," I replied with a laugh. I straightened out my clothes (blue jeggings and my own designed tank top, which was purple and had  an amethyst written on it, with a white, light jacket over the top), and re-fixed up my long ,chocolate brown ringlets  that matched my eyes. I looked over Louis and he was smiling. " What is it?" I asked. 

"Oh nothing just that you still look beautiful straightened out and neat looking," he replied. My cheeks flooded a deep red again. Just then 'One Way Or Another' Came on and I ( out of habit ) turned it up and started singing. 

       "I wanna hold you tight , Oh Yeah."

I sang along the whole not missing a word or going out of tune. after the song finished, Louis pulled up in the car park, drew his hood over his head, turned to face me and said, " You have an amazing voice." I grabbed my bag and got out the car." thanks," was all I replied, then sought out a trolley. I grabbed one and we headed in. Louis showed me around, then went back to grab another trolley, to help me carry all the shopping. then we had covered dinner for the next week,  fruit and veg, snacks and breakfast, Louis looked after the trolleys while I grabbed one more for lunch and dessert. finally we finished and the bill came close to 1000 dollars. Louis and  I took the shopping carets to his car and packed the boot and back seat  full of shopping. On the short way back home I started convo by saying," What are you 5 serving for dinner tonight?" He first displayed a look of confusion and then remembering.

"Oh yeah that's right. Umm..... do you and the other girls like roasted chicken?" He asked.

" Yeah," I replied.

" awesome, We'll have that then," he said

 " sounds good, but first I need a nice, refreshing shower." I remarked and Louis laughed. ' I wonder what the girls are up to' I thought.










 Hi guys caitylee here. Just  thought i'd let you know that the next few chapters will be n   everyone else's P.O.V.  and spread the word about my book if you like it please. 



                                                                                                 Thanks for reading



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