Daddy Won't See

You all know Krissy and Colton's story but you have never read them like this.
Meet the new Krissy, or as everyone now calls her Evans, at her new boarding school. She's the head badass and the most feared with only one friend, Macy.
She goes on in life without a care in the world. She's no longer a Daddy's Girl.
But where's Colton? Dead maybe?
Find out in Daddy Won't See!



Okay so I know many of you are upset with the ending with my story. Let me say, I had this planned out from the start but I didn't know when I was going to kill them. I ended up writing a sequel, which I didn't plan but I felt it helped devolve the characters more and their love.

While writing these books, I did become emotionally attached to these characters as much as you guys did while reading about them. In fact, call me an emotional wreck all you want, I did cry while writing this last chapter.

I didn't know where I was going with the story anymore and I realised when you almost give up on your story and your characters, it's time to let them go.


But now is your chance to change the ending.

In this writing competition, you are to write your final chapter of the story. You can change whatever you would like. The characters can escape and live happily ever after as you may have wanted them to. You can be random and create a totally new character that may be good or bad. Do whatever you want.

To enter this contest please create a new movella for yourself for the individual chapter. In the blurb please write: "Daddy Won't See; Alternative Ending Contest" and whatever else you would like to write. Then post a comment on this movella with a link to your chapter entry.

You will have lots of time to write this so you can tweak it up as much as you need to and maybe make it as long as you can to add in lots of detail. Although, there is no minimum or maximum on length.

Your due date will be: November 22nd 2013. If this is an issue and you need more time, please let me know, its not a problem.

Once I have all the enteries, I will make a movella of all of them together with the author's name on each chapter. This allows readers to see all the new endings and vote on their favorite.

The winner of this contest will have their chapter posted in this movella as the "Official Alternate Ending" along with my "Author's Alternative Ending" and a prize of their choice, to an extent.



While you are writing chapter you might want to think about:

-The other characters that have not been mentioned lately

-Where they are and what position they are in now

-What the characters would say and how they normally act

-Detail is key, you don't need to rush

Just suggestions.

Remember, I am an Editor so if you need help or want me to proof read your chapter, just ask and I will help right away.

That is all I have to announce, if you have any questions, please ask.

And remember, you can't win if you don't try. Show how much you may have cared about these characters.


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