Primal Tears (partial movie script - PG13 edition)

I have long been a fan of Kelpie Wilson's novel Primal Tears. To find out more about it click the link to the youtube video. I have included here, a sample of the theatrical version of a script for a Primal Tears film.

I will eventually post a sample of the R rated version on here as well.

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12. Sage and the Angel

EXT. OFF EDGE OF CLIFF - MOONLIT NIGHT

Sage goes over the cliff, but the powerful wind carries her through the air. She looks shocked. She floats through the air over the clouds, looking around her in amazement. Suddenly a lovely rocky spire comes into view. Sage looks at it in wonder. It’s thin and has what looks like a winding pathway ascending up it like a huge snake.

EXT. SNAKE TOWER - MOONLIT NIGHT

The wind sets Sage down at the top of the rocky tower. She takes a couple of deep breaths. Then she looks out over the edge. She sees water down below. She gulps when she realizes just how high she is.

Sage turns away and hugs the rock. The muscles around her eyes start to tighten.

SAGE:

“Why me? Why did my mother have to bring me into this world?”

Sage looks up at the sky.

SAGE:

“Answer me! Why was I brought here? I’m just a freak! I’m just an abomination from a test-tube! Why? Why?”

During this rant, Sage has sunken to her knees and is hugging the rock in desperation.

SAGE:

“Why? Why?”

Suddenly everything becomes much brighter. Sage looks up at the sky again in confusion. A lovely rainbow has appeared in the sky right next to the rocky tower, and an ANGELIC VOICE begins speaking.

ANGELIC VOICE:

“You are loved sweet child. Because you are a child of this earth just like all creatures.”

Sage’s eye-wrinkles soften a bit.

ANGELIC VOICE:

“Never forget that you have a destiny laid out before you child. You must find your calling.”

Sage stands up.

ANGELIC VOICE:

“Listen to your heart. And to the sounds of mother nature. You will know it when you are ready.”

Sage closes her eyes and takes a deep breath. A soft breeze blows her hair in the wind. She looks upset and opens her eyes.

SAGE:

“But I don’t know what my path is supposed to be?”

There is no answer for a few seconds, and Sage looks around in despair.

ANGELIC VOICE:

“Open your heart to all that your creator has to offer. Listen to all she tells you. Then you will find peace.”

Sage looks down at the water below. She looks up at the sky. Suddenly she looks very determined and strong.

SAGE:

“I will find my true calling. And I will not rest until I have discovered it.”

Sage closes her eyes and a little smile appears on her face.

SAGE:

“Thank you rainbow mountain.”

And with that Sage leaps off the edge of the tower. She dives straight down, keeping her eyes shut the whole time.
 

 

While a scene like this did happen in the book, I altered it slightly. What do you think? Is it too Pocahontas-y?

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