Primal Tears (partial movie script - PG13 edition)

I have long been a fan of Kelpie Wilson's novel Primal Tears. To find out more about it click the link to the youtube video. I have included here, a sample of the theatrical version of a script for a Primal Tears film.

I will eventually post a sample of the R rated version on here as well.

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17. Romance Under the Stars

EXT. TREE NATION WEB - STARRY NIGHT

Sage and Carver are lying in sleeping bags looking up at the stars.

SAGE:

“They’re all so pretty.”

Carver glances at her.

CARVER:

“They are.”

Sage continues to look at the sky.

SAGE:

“Silly. You aren’t even looking at them.”

Carver kisses her gently on the cheek. Sage giggles softly and her eyes come down from the heavens.

CARVER:

“I see the stars whenever I look at your face little girlfriend.”

Sage smiles and plants a kiss on Carver’s lips. Carver kisses her back. They then wrap their arms around each other, and close their eyes.

EXT. TREE NATION WEB - DAWN

The members of Tree Nation are in various stages of waking up. Sage is stretching and Carver is already fishing through a small paper bag looking for breakfast.

Sage sees Carver looking for food, and smiles at her boyfriend’s backside.

SAGE:

“You have a nice butt.”

CARVER:

“And a good morning to you too.”

Carver turns to Sage holding a piece of toast. Sage reaches out to take it.

SAGE:

“Thanks.”

All of a sudden V.J and Tanika come zooming onto Sage and Carver’s platform via zip-line.

V.J:

“Good morning.”

 

 

In the final chapter of this sample, Sage will be reunited with her family. When I post the extended version later, I will post an extended version of Sage's first adventure in the woods, and then I will pick up where the sample of the theatrical version ended. I am still working on the script though so it will probably be a while.

I hope you'll comment on what you've read so far. Do you think this could make an interesting movie?

One more chapter to go

 

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