Annie Richardson, Bonnie Hyde, Rachael Caparelli and Des Palmer are in the band 'Secret Tomorrow.' When they got famous on the X Factor, it turned their lives around. Can 5 British boys and 1 Irish lad turn it around again?

(Admin Note: Little Mix did not exist in this story... so all of Little Mix's songs are now Secret Tomorrow's songs)


6. The Date with Lonnie

Louis' POV


I am so nervous about my date with Bonnie. What if I stuff it up? What if I say something wrong. I think I like her, but I don't know. I haven't really experienced 'real love' yet, so how do I know when I have it? I guess we will know tonight. I am taking Bonnie to a carnival with rides and everything. When we were talking alone she told me that she loved rides and candy floss. I really hope she likes it.

"Time to go," Liam shouted to everyone, jumping off the couch. You can easily tell that he likes Annie.

I grabbed my jacket and walked to my car. When inside, I turned on the radio and our song 'Rock Me' came on. I smiled to myself, thinking we did a good job on this song.

We reached the girls' house, and I hopped out before anyone else. I waited till everyone was out of their cars and we all walked up together and I knocked on the door.

"HOLD ON A MINUTE,"  we heard Des' voice from inside. We all laughed and her enthusiasm.

They all came to the door, and... woah. They look fantastic, but my eye caught Bonnie. She had on a dress that goes down to her feet. It was covered in blue, purple and green flowers and had a black belt around it. She had on sandals that were silver around her feet, and long black hair was pulled back into a ponytail and her fringe fell out.

"Wow, you look gorgeous," I told her, eyeing her up and down.

"You don't look so bad yourself, Tomlinson," She giggled.

I took her hand, and led her to my car. We got in and started to drive to the carnival.

"So, where are we going?" She asked, hopefully.

"It's a surprise," I told her, smiling.

"Argg, you know I hate surprises," She groaned, looking out her window.

"That's the man reason why I did it, love," I told her.

She turned and hit me on the arm, giggling. I just smiled and concentrated on getting there.

When we reached the carnival, her eyes lit up like a little kid seeing their mum at the end of their first day at school.

"Oh my god, it's a carnival! Thank you so much!" She exclaimed, jumping out of the car.

I just laughed and got out with her.

We went on all of the rides and had heaps of cotton candy.

"Thank you Louis, this has been the best date ever," Bonnie told me, kissing my cheek. Okay I can't take this anymore.

"Bonnie, I need to tell you something," I told her, looking serious.

"Oh, ok," She said, confused.

"I know I have only known you a few hours, but something about you makes me happy. Something about you makes me feel like a kid again, Something-" 

"Louis," she said, cutting me off. "Get to the point."

"Oh, right," I said, chuckling. "Bonnie, will you be my girlfriend?" Oh... my... god... I can't believe I just asked her that.

"Oh my god Louis," Bonnie said, her hand covering her mouth. "I would love to."

That took me by surprise. "Wait, what? You really wanna go out with me?"

"Yes, now shut up and kiss me," She said cheekily.

"Yes ma'am," I whispered, and lowered my head to hers.

When my lips met hers, sure enough fireworks came up! She has the softest lips.

We separated after a while, and smiled at each other.

"Come on love, let's get you home," I said, holding out my hand to her. She took it and giggled. I helped her stand up and then I put my hand enough her waist. We walked back to my car, after the best date of my life!

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