Tori is a fourteen year old girl living in the south of England. She loves to hang out with her friends: Kim, Joseph, Matt and Louis. Louis isn't really one of her friends, he's Matt's. And only recently, she's realised how determined he is to get inside her friendship group and steal her friends. He wants to be friends with everyone inside her friendship group. Except her.
So Tori goes out on a daring mission, not just to recover her friends for Louis' grasp, but to get rid of him altogether. Sounds easy, right? Just what Tori thinks. But it isn't at all easy if Louis has the power to completely stop you in your tracks, in ways which aren't even imaginable.


6. How many times to I have to kill the same guy?

Hey guys! Loving this so far? Want to know to whom the fist which punched Louis belongs? Well, you're just gonna have to wait, I'm afraid. I know I should really save this until the end of the book, but I was wondering about making a sequel?I have got some pretty good ideas ATM and should I make another book once this has finished? Comment below :P


The mysterious guy who punched Mr Pig-Face ran off as soon as Mr Pig-Face was hit. So there he was, sprawled on the ground, in obvious amounts of pain. I decided, as usual, to take advantage of this.

"Well" I said, crouching down, so I was face to face with him, "it seems that you lost now, Loser!" I stood up and started walking away. I looked behind me to see if Kim was  following me, apologising and admitting that she was wrong to fall for him. Guess what? She wasn't. I stopped and saw Kim crouching down next to Louis, looking shocked.

"Kim?" I asked. "You coming?" She paused for a moment and stood up. She came close and looked at me straight in the eye.

"Never" her voice was icy cold.

"Um, what now?" I asked, confused.

"Oh, Tori, don't turn this into a joke!" She yelled. "You could have injured him really badly!" 

"But, I didn't, Kim" I replied softly. 

"You know what? Louis was right about you. You are a loser and will never ever be my best friend EVER again!" She yelled in my face, and walked back over to Louis, stroking his unconscious face. 

"Guys?" I asked, looking at Matt and Joe. They shrugged and followed Kim. Great. Now I had no friends. I tried to act cool, like I didn't care, although I totally did. I decided to go back home, after all, things couldn't get worse. Actually, I lied. they could. 

So, as I was walking along the road, my phone rang. Ohmygosh, it was James! I had no idea why he was calling me; after all, how could he know what happened? I took my phone out of my pocket to answer it and then-woosh!- Mr Pig-Face took it off me. Um, I thought he was unconscious? Turns out later that Kim had revived him. Yay. 

"Oi, Louis!" I yelled, racing after him. I wasn't labelled the record holder for 200 meters for nothing. I caught up with him in a matter of seconds, but, as boys generally are, he was so tall that I could not reach my phone. He stopped and turned around.

"Want your phone?" He asked mockingly, waving it above his head. I leapt up and down, trying to reach it. I then had an idea. 

"Hey, Louis" I said, sweeter than sugar. He looked at me, puzzled. I crept over to him and whispered in his ear. "Don't look now, but your ever-so-expensive laptop is in the middle of the road." Surprisingly, he brought it. So, he screamed, threw my phone in the air (which I caught) and ran out to the road. There was a screeching of cars but, unluckily, no one hit him. Jeez! How many times do I have to kill the same guy? 

"Hey, Tori!" I heard a yell, then I saw James running down the pavement. At that exact moment, Kim pulled Louis out from the road. They were looking at each other like they wanted to kill each other. (If that makes sense) I pulled a face at Kim, but she looked away. 

"HOW DARE YOU!" James yelled. Louis looked puzzled. "Touch my girlfriend!" James added. 

I suddenly knew who knocked out Louis. It was James. 

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