Beautiful (Louis Tomlinson)

Have you ever met a guy who made you feel beautiful? Feel like a princess? or like you meant something to him? Well that's exactly how Rose felt when she met a guy who would make her feel like she's the only girl that mattered in the world. She was picked on and bullied about her weight when she was younger and now she has changed and her life got a whole lot better when she met the guy... the guy that would make her feel special.
Follow Rose and her best friend Domonique, Dom for short, on their adventure of love, insecurities, and more love.


1. New Song


*Louis' P.O.V.*

Rose was amazing out there! The fans loved her! She should be an opening act for us more often. Occasionally she would look over at me for reassurance. I would always give her a smile and a thumbs up. She seemed to calm down every time she looked at me. Me on the other hand, I was nervous as hell. We're performing a new song tonight. No ones heard it besides us and the recording people. Management hasn't even heard it yet! "Hey Boobear, you alright? You look pale" Harry asked putting is hand on my shoulder. "Y-ya just peachy!" I stuttered. "Wow using Rose's word... You two are so cute together" he cooed. "Whatever" I sighed. 

When Rose got of the stage the lads, Dom and I all ran up to her telling her she did amazing. "That was magnificent love" I said giving her a long, deep, passionate kiss. "GET SOME LOU!" Zayn, Niall, and Harry yelled. We pulled a part and we looked at the three of them. "I'm gonna get you guys if you don't shut up" Rose laughed. They put their hands up in defeat. "Boy's, your on in ten seconds" a stage manager said coming up to the lads and me. We said ok and grabbed our mics. "Good Luck Babe" Rose said giving me a kiss on my cheek. "Thank you love" I said smiling at her. 

The opening beats to 'Still The One' started and the screams got louder. Didn't think that was possible. The lads and I were jumping around the stage having the time of our lives. After 'Still The One', we sang 'Kiss You', then we covered some songs, then 'Over Again', then the moment I've been nervous for.

"How is everyone doing tonight" Liam asked. The fans screamed to signal they were doing great.  "How bout we read some tweets?" Zayn asked. They screamed again. Harry read out the first tweet. "What toothpaste do you use cause you all have got lovely teeth? Well I'm not sure about the other lads, but I use Colgate." "I also use Colgate" I said. "Ya me too" Zayn said. "Who doesn't use Colgate?" Niall asked jokingly. "Give it up for Colgate ladies and gentlemen" I said into the mic.

"Next tweet. 'Can't hardly contain my excitement. Let's do this!" Niall said into the mic. It's quite comical how carefree he is. He's just like screw you bitches, this world is mine! Oh Niall... Zayn read the next tweet. "Rose and Dom are lovely dancers!" I looked over at Dom and Rose. Rose was glaring at Zayn and Dom looked shocked. "And what do you mean by that Zayn?" Liam asked. "Well..." Zayn paused and looked at the girls. "I posted that video of the girls dancing in the kitchen earlier this morning on twitter" Zayn said smiling. "Mate your so dead" Harry said into his mic. The fans laughed. "Moving on gentlemen" Liam said taking charge. "I've gone three months without using a spoon xx!" Liam said. "That's awesome! I'm very proud of you! Keep up the good work love" Liam said smiling like a little kid.

My turn to read. My tweet came up on the screen and there were a bunch of 'awe's going about the building. "How long have you and Rose been dating" I read out. "Two month. 22 Days. 22 Hours. 22 minutes. 22 seconds" I said slowly looking at Rose. The crowed awed. I smiled at her. "Oh Paul" Harry said into the mic. Paul picked up Rose and carried her onto stage. "Paul put me down" Rose said holding onto Dom dragging her out there too. "Ok" he said and dropped her on the couch as Dom ran off stage... I guess she doesn't like to be in front of crowds? The crowd screamed again. "Hello love" I said walking over to sit next to her on the couch.

"Lou? Why am I up here again?" she asked. "Cause I have a surprise for you" I said smiling at her. She nodded her head slightly. "So girls and guys this is a new song never before heard writen by our friend Ed Sheeran. I hope you enjoy it" I said and the music started.


'Your hand fits in mine

Like it's made just for me

But bear this in mind

It was meant to be

And I'm joining up the dots with the freckles on your cheeks

And it all makes sense to me'


Zayn sang ever-so beautifully.


 'I know you've never loved

The crinkles by your eyes

When you smile

You've never loved

Your stomach or your thighs,

The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine

But I'll love them endlessly'


Liam sang with his beautiful angel like voice. Then Zayn and Liam together


'I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth

But if I do

It's you

Oh, it's you they add up to

I'm in love with you

And all these little things'


'You can't go to bed without a cup of tea

And maybe that's the reason that you talk in your sleep

And all those conversations are the secrets that I keep

Though it makes no sense to me'

I sang putting my heart and soul into it. I saw a tear roll down her check. I quickly wiped it and kissed her check. Then Harry sang part.   

 'I know you've never loved

  The sound of your voice on tape

  You never want

  To know how much you weigh

  You still have to squeeze into your jeans

  But you're perfect to me

    I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth  

But if it's true

  It's you,

  It's you they add up to

  I'm in love with you  

And all these little things'

Beautiful as ever Hazza. The whole time Rose was looking at me. Tears brimming her eyes. I pulled her into my arms and held her while Niall sang his part. He has an amazing voice. I rubbed Rose's back as I held her.         

'You'll never love yourself half as much as I love you

  You'll never treat yourself right, darling, but I want you to.

  If I let you know I'm here for you

  Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you, oh.'  

Back to Harold. 

    'And I've just let these little things slip out of my mouth

  'Cause it's you,  

Oh, it's you,  

It's you they add up to

  And I'm in love with you

  And all these little things'


    The whole time the fans were silent. They were really listening to the words we sang. Then the last part where we all sang together.    

'I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth  

But if it's true

  It's you,

  It's you they add up to

  I'm in love with you

  And all your little things' 

The fans went crazy. Like even more crazy than ever. "Lou... T-that w-was beautiful. I-i don't know what to say..." Rose stuttered.  "Rose Marie Diamond. I love you with all my heart" I said getting down on one knee. The fans went crazy. I pulled out a ring and took took her hand and continued. "I never want to be away from you. Your my little flowery Rose. Will you make me the happiest man alive and accept this promise ring. Promise me you'll stay with me forever and become my Queen one day. Promise me you'll be with me through everything. I promise to love you with all my heart. I promise to not let anything come between us. I promise you the world." By now there were tears rolling down her checks and a smile on her face and the crowed screaming like never before.

"Louis. I promise. I promise to stay with you and become your Queen someday. I promise to love you through everything. I accept the ring" she said as I slipped the ring on her finger. "I love you so much" I whispered in her ear as I gave her a hug. "I love you too" she said hugging me back. "That's beautiful" Harry cooed into his mic. "Makes me wanna cry" Niall said starting to fake cry. Zayn and Liam were hugging each other fake crying on each others shoulder's. "Oh god" Rose said as she laughed. "Have you notice how much you sound like Louis when you say that?" Liam asked. She blushed.  "Were gonna take that as a no...Is there anything you would like to say love" I asked her.

 "Um... I just want to say thank you so much for supporting Louis and I. You guys have know idea how much it means to me that you guys accept me to date Louis. You guys have made dating Louis a whole lot easier. And I am ever so grateful of that. You guys are my idols" she said sweetly. The crowed cheered again. Twitter's going to crash tonight. Rose gave me a kiss on the cheek then walked off stage towards Dom. I looked at her and smiled as she walked off.

The lads and I finished  up the concert singing all of our new songs on the 'Take Me Home' album, and ended it with 'What Makes You Beautiful'. After the concert we went to a meet and great. A lot of the fans were saying how much they loved Rose and that she was perfect for me. Some even asked Rose for an autograph. She looked over at me and smiled. I smiled back and thought 'I'm the luckiest guy in the world.'

I went back to signing autographs. A few minutes later, I looked up to find Rose and she and Dom were gone...


A/N I know I haven't posted in a while and i'm sorry... but in about a week and a half i'll have two weeks to do absolutely nothing but write.... thx for reading my lovelies :) xx <3

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