How Breaking Dawn Should Have Ended

This is for the Twilight Fanfic competition.

This is how I think Breaking Dawn (last Twilight book) should have ended. If you have read it then you know there is a lot of build up to a fight and bam! no fight. I found it very disappointing and really let the book down. Also the ending has changed for the film too and if you have seen the trailer you get a glimpse of what might happen.

In this movella I'm going to write different versions of how it should have ended. Please no hate if your favourite character dies and please no hate in general.

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7. Version #6

Bella's P.O.V 

I lay on the hard floor of the ballet studio and screamed out in pain as the venom moved slowly through my veins, as if it was trying it's best to torture it's victim, changing my body slowly. I watched as Edward pushed James into a wall and a thundering crunch echoed through the studio. I screamed out again and tried to tell Edward to be careful but I couldn't find the strength to do so. I didn't want to distract Edward too much and get him killed. 

It felt as if my body was slowly being burnt, as if the venom was leaving my veins charred. The rest of the Cullen family arrived and Carlisle took one look at me and knew what had happened. 

"It's too late." Was all he could say. I was going to be a vampire. I looked at his sad expression.

"Help me, please," I whimpered. "It's burning!" I screamed out some more.  

I looked over when the strong smell of smoke flew up my nose and saw that the others helped Edward tear James apart and throw him into the fire. After Edward picked me up carefully, knowing that my leg had been snapped, and he ran outside. I tried to stop screaming but it burnt so much! I took a quick glimpse at the studio before we got into the car and saw it was in flames, the smoke tickling the night sky and covering the very few grey clouds. 

The three days was torture. It felt like I have spent years waiting for the burning to slowly subside. It was until the pain slowly slipped away that I knew it was finally over and that I was a vampire. I could live forever now. Forever with Edward. 

Suddenly I was grateful my human life was over. I knew I wouldn't be able to see Charlie again and I felt a pang of guilt as I used mom's last words to him to let me leave. I could leave him a note. I suppose. But he would be in so much pain. Maybe I could just simply go missing.

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