How Breaking Dawn Should Have Ended

This is for the Twilight Fanfic competition.

This is how I think Breaking Dawn (last Twilight book) should have ended. If you have read it then you know there is a lot of build up to a fight and bam! no fight. I found it very disappointing and really let the book down. Also the ending has changed for the film too and if you have seen the trailer you get a glimpse of what might happen.

In this movella I'm going to write different versions of how it should have ended. Please no hate if your favourite character dies and please no hate in general.

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3. Version #3

Bella P.O.V

We stood in a huddle. Days passed by and still no Volturi. Alice returned with two new vampires. Nahuel and his sister. Nahuel is like Renesmee. Half vampire and half human. The wind was strong, but not strong enough to push us down. What are they playing at?! 

A week passed. Still no Volturi. We started to wonder where they were. What happened? The snow was slowly melting away, patches of grass revealing itself. 

"They went back to Italy. They saw us and saw that we had an army greater than theirs." Alice mumbled. We said goodbye to all the vampires and apologised to them for wasting their time. Most said they will stay nearby in case the Volturi attack us again. 

A year later: 

"The Volturi are coming back.They won't fight us, they will see Renesmee is no longer a child and that she is half human and half vampire." Alice sang. She had called a meeting in the living room, we all thought the news would be bad. 

"Why did they pick now though?" I asked. 

"Maybe because they were waiting for her to be conspicuous." Edward replied. 

"True." I muttered. 

"Always looking for a reason to kill." Emmett added, laughing quietly. 

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