How Breaking Dawn Should Have Ended

This is for the Twilight Fanfic competition.

This is how I think Breaking Dawn (last Twilight book) should have ended. If you have read it then you know there is a lot of build up to a fight and bam! no fight. I found it very disappointing and really let the book down. Also the ending has changed for the film too and if you have seen the trailer you get a glimpse of what might happen.

In this movella I'm going to write different versions of how it should have ended. Please no hate if your favourite character dies and please no hate in general.

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6. Version #2 cont.

Joanna's P.O.V

It took a few years to resist the temptation of human blood. I prefer eating animals anyway. Bella is lucky, she skipped the whole newborn step and was able to resist human blood straight from the start. I love pranking the Cullens, only when Edward is in a different room. I can't sneak up on Edward or Alice. Renesmee is growing so fast. It's nice to have a family after so many years of wandering alone. 

"Boo!" I giggled as I appeared out of nowhere in front of Rosalie. I don't mind Rosalie, but she gets pissed off too much. She scowled at me and continued with arranging flowers. 

"Scaring us isn't funny anymore. You're immature for a vampire." She hissed. I giggled some more and she growled at me. I vanished and ran away. 

I found Renesmee with Esme and switched off my invisibility so I didn't scare Renesmee. 

"Hiya." I sang and Renesmee looked around and giggled with delight. 

"Joanna!" She screamed and ran into my arms. I gave her a big hug. 

"Please do my hair, Esme is busy cooking me dinner." She begged, pouting slightly. 

"Sure." I promised and she skipped to the lounge and perched on the floor in front of a sofa. 

"Thanks, Joanna." She sang. 

"No problem, Nessie." I said, plaiting her hair carefully. 

"Momma says that the Volturi might be returning to check on me. Is she telling the truth?" She asked quietly. 

"Yes. They just want to make sure you're not in any danger of letting humans know vampires exist. They won't harm you and if they wanted to harm you they would have to go through us. They wouldn't be able to harm me because they wouldn't be able to see me. You're perfectly safe." I assured her. If needed I could turn Renesmee invisible and run off with her, it took a lot of practice but now I can turn objects and people around me invisible. It comes in handy a lot. 

"Is my hair finished yet?" Renesmee asked. 

"Yes. There you go. Go find Jacob and show him, I'm sure he'll love it. Show Alice, your momma, Edward and Esme too." I suggested and Renesmee nodded and skipped off to find Jacob. 

Jacob and Renesmee are so sweet together. Soon they could date, if Renesmee wants. Renesmee is roughly about ten years old so maybe another year and Jacob and Renesmee will be the same age. 

The sound of a car drove up the driveway and I knew Charlie was here. Charlie thinks I'm Alice's niece and that I'm sixteen (I was sixteen when I was changed) so of course that means I need to go to school but the story is that I get home schooled. I would hate to go to school and be the only freaky vampire there, plus it isn't safe to make any human friends. When the doorbell rang I ran to the door to answer it. 

"Hello." I said, smiling as warmly as I could. 

"Hello, is Bella in?" Charlie asked. 

"Um, I think so." I mumbled and turned to shout (unnecessary to shout but we have to act as human as possible). "Bella?" 

"Yes? Is Dad here?" I heard her call back.

"Yup. He's at the door now," I replied. "she'll be here in a minute." I told Charlie and turned to walk back into the house. 

I sat in the lounge and turned the TV on and tried to act as human as possible. I watched as Edward walked in, Jasper, Emmett and Carlisle are supposed to be hiking somewhere far away for a few days. 

"Joanna? Just to let you know that we will be leaving Forks to live in Alaska for a while." I stared at Edward in shock. 




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