Ed's Girl (1D fanfic)

Max is a 16 year old girl who has fallen in Love! In love with a 20 year old though. That lucky guy is Ed Sheeran, and he feels the exact same way, that is probably the reason they have been dating for almost 2 years. She writes and he sings, and when ever he does write, it is always about her and her life. They just get each other. One day when ed introduces his girl to 5 of his best friends and lyrics singers One Direction? Think about it, then read Ed's Girl
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8. chapter 5

*thanks to sarah <3 there is another chapter!!! If you have already favorited and you want anither chapter, comment! Apples for Apples.

Louis's POV

I cannot wait to supprise that girl... what is her name?

"Hazz, what is the name of the girl we are meeting today?"

"Her name's Max." Harry tells me.

"Hmm.." I mumble.

She has a very interesting name. Never heard a girl named Max. She is probably American.

     We all run and sing in harmony:

     "Happy Birthday."

     She looks at us pretty confused, but a smile is slowly growing on her face as she analizes us.

    "Wow, uhm... not to be rude, but who are you guys?" she ask with a big smile on her face.

    "Well we are...." I start off.

    "One direction." Nialls says in his Anouncers voice. That only makes her giggle.

When she giggled, her caremel brown hair bounced on her sholders. Her big blue eyes lighted up while her her cheeks showed faint dimples. She then looked at Niall and said:

     "That is really funny." she says than giggles a bit more.

She then looks at me, then I automatically what to look away. I then see the buldge in my pocket and remeber that I brought a little gift for Max from me. I did some extra shopping when I heard it was a family friend of somebody we are good friends with. I just can't remeber Harry telling me who. I put my hand in my pocket and pull out the gift. I quickly shove it back in my pocket when she gets up from the couch.

     "What do you have in your pocket?" ashe ask me pointing to my pocket.

     "Oh, nothing." I tell her seriously trying to get her to believe what I am saying. I want to give it to her when the boys are not around. I do not want them to feel bad for not getting her anything.

*may the Mr.Styles and Mr.Malik come to the front desk. Mr. Styles and Mr.Malik to teh front desk please, thankyou: the intercom says.

     "Well that is us, we will see you in about an hour." Harry says.

     "Same aswell, see ya later." Zayn says.

We wave to them and they wave back before walking out of the room.

*Mr.Horan may you please pick up a package at the front desk. Mr.Horan, package at the front desk: the intercom says almost right after.

     "I wonder what package that could be...ohh, probably my new phone! Well I will meet up with you guys in the cafiteria, ya?" Niall says.

     "Okay, meet you there." I say, waving to him as he moves out of the room.

Max hoppes on the couch then says:"I guess it is just the three of us then, or are you guys like a celeberty fast card that has to leave for the next surprise?" She aks us.

     "What, no, you have us for as long as you want us." Liam says with a smile sitting next to her.

     "Yup, you are pretty much stuck with us." I say throwing my hands up and sitting on her right side on the end of t he couch.

     "Okay then, well uhmm... what do you guys wqant to talk about?" she asks looking at both of us, then looking a bit shy.

     "Uhmm... anything, what do you want to talk about?" liam asks.

      "Well, I guess I would like to know more about you guys like... what are your names and stuff." she says.

     "I like how you say and stuff. Haha, well my name is Liam Payne." Liam says looking at her smiling the whole entire time. I think that Liam is trying to flirt with her.

     "I am Louis Tomlinson." I say whinking at her trying to make Liam red. All he does is look at me with a playful 'are you kidding me?' look. All i do is smile. Max notices or exchange in looks.

     " Haha, you guys are really funny, I-" she starts but soon gets cut off ny the ring of Liam's phone. He look at it then asks to be excused for a while.

He steps out of the room and tehn soon after says that he will be back and will meet us in the cafiteria. I then cize the moment and walk over to teh door and close it.

Max's POV

Well I guess they are not going to treat me like I am owned by a pimp. But that does not mean I am still watching out. That is the reason why I got a bit shacky then stud up from the couch as soon as I say Louis close the door.

     He walks up to me and then gets done on one knee. What is he going to do? Marry me? Is he my boyfriend? Is that t he reason why he was smiling at me when we were sitting on teh couch? Was that the reason why he looked away when I looked at him? He seems to like me.... yeah, yeah I think he is my boyfriend. Finally, something that makes sence!

     "Max..." he starts then takes a small box out of his pocket.

     "Happy Birthday." he says opening the little box revealing a all dimond ring then holding it out in front of me.

     "Than-thank- thankyou so so much Louis, that is the sweetest thing that somebody has ever done for me!" I say before he slides the ring on my finger and gets up. I take his face in my hands and pull him close to me. I look deep into his eyes, then say:"Really, thank you."

     I lean in closer, that is when I feel his lips touch mine. My first kiss? I think to myself. No, impossible, he is my boyfriend. I guess it only feels like that because I think I have never ever felt like this kissing somebody.

     "What in the-" I see a man with red hair stand in the door way looking at us like we just robbed a bank.

oh snap! Cliffhanger!!! Leave a comment about the chapter or what you t hink about the book overall or just yealling at me to update! It is all good to me! And do not forget to favorite my book so you know when the next chapter is out! Apples for Apples!:-O

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