Stole My Heart [EDITING]

--BOOK 1 OF THE STOLE MY HEART SERIES-- Mandy is a shy 16 year old girl who lives in San Diego, California with her loving, but depressed and alcoholic, mother and her 14 year old half sister. After being in a bad relationship in the past, Mandy has been afraid to fall in love again but after her 2 best friends drag her to a One Direction -the band she hates with passion- concert she meets the adorable Harry Styles, who starts to fall in love with her, and she realizes that she may be falling in love with him too. Will she be able to manage her trust issues and let him teach her how to love again, or will she push him away?





I don't know if you people are still interested in this story or not since it's been so long since I last updated it but I'm going to change up this story again because the plot I have right now is too cliché, overused, and not realistic at all. As you know, I first wrote this cliché story back in 2012 but I've been trying to edit it after I finished it since it was horrible before. I thought keeping the same plot and rewriting the chapters would make the story better but after reading over this story today, I started to realize that it's still horrible and very unrealistic. I know that's the whole point of a fanfiction but having a plot where a normal girl with a "sad life" and isn't really a fan of the boys meets Harry backstage at a 1D concert and falls in love with him is so overused. 


So last night I officially decided to write a new plot for this story to make it flow more and make it more realistic. Yes the original female is going to have the same name and be a normal girl but she's going to have SOME struggles except it's not going to be over the top like it is right now. The new plot is basically going to be the same story but it's going to have a better plot. I don't know if it's going to be cliché or overused as well but I'm still going to do it. I'm really excited to share it with you all and hopefully I'll have the first few chapters up soon. :) 


-Marisa (heskiwi94x) 

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