Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.


6. What makes me angry

little author's note :

Hey everyone the last chapter was still apart of Lilly's flashback hope you got that and this chapter is just gonna be regular like how it was before the flashback.~Mariaxx

Lilly's P.O.V

I walked to school and just thought some more about my first day of school but mostly about what the surprise could be. What have I wanted all my life more than anything? To be a singer. Well no, that can't be it. It's not just like my parents can come home one day from work and just be like hey your a singer now SURPRISE !!! My parents surprises are always something I've always wanted. Like when I was 5 they told me when I got home there was a suprise waiting for me in my room when I ran up to my room there was this beautiful baby german shepard with great big brown eyes on his back waiting for a belly rub. I named him snickers cause that was my favorite candy bar but snickers was the perfect dog he would aways be there for me and protect me when I felt scared. Snickers died when I was 12 of cancer ever since then my parents say I've never been the same. Snickers was my best friend and it's hard to grow up with something you love then one day it's just gone.


Luch time

The day was becoming a drag of boredom I wanted to rush home to finally know what the surprise was and get out of school. Last days are suppose to be so exciting but it just sucks.My daydreaming was stopped by the most annoying obnoxious laughs ever. Not normal loud laughs, laughs that the "popular" girls wanted everyone in the whole danm cafeteria to hear just so they could look in the direction they were looking in which was ALWAYS the direction I was sitting in. I don't understand why if you hate someone you make it so that everytime you say something it's about the person you hate. If the "populars" really hated me for no reason at all then why was the reason that they're all friends or the reason for all their stupid conversations? It just makes no sence to me. I seriously don't even care what those stupid "popular" girls would say about me anyways but what really got me angry was Emma. How could she know how much I hate the "populars" and she just rubs it in my face that she's not my friend anymore. I never did anything to her I treated her like a sister and my parents treated her like a daughter even when she got me into trouble I never just let her go home to her abusive father and drunk mother. I guess she doesn't tell the other "popular" girls her daddy and mommy problems cause to them shes little miss perfect. She's a terrible person, one day she just randomly came up to me and called me fat and started telling everyone I had a crush on Jake. It was true but it was a secret she promised to keep and she didn't. So ever since that day she told the QUEEN B "popular" girl Megan Johnson that I had a crush on Jake. I never talked to her again cause after that Megan would do anything to keep me far away from Jake, she got one of the guys on the football team to convince him to ask her out and after he did she's made my life a living hell. If she sees me even making the slightest eye contact with Jake she'll walk up to him and makes out with him right in my face to remind me I'm worthless and that I could never be his girlfriend. I used to cry but now I just ignore her. My crying made her feel some power over me and now that it's the last day of school I couldn't care less about what she thinks of me.



I love this chapter because it really explains what really happened to Lilly and Jake and why they drifted apart it doesn't just leave you clueless... hope you liked it too im gonna post more in the next couple minutes again love you guys bye : D ~Mariaxx


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