Fall For Five

Well now that I kinda know what direction ( lol ) I want to go in with my story I thought I should write a little review on what new readers will read in this story =D
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Falling for Five is a story about a young girl named Lilly Davis an 18 year old american girl who has only ever wanted one thing, when her parents gives her the gift of a life time she goes out on an adventure to start a life on her own.
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Hopefully that makes you want to read my story if not just give me a chance and read it anyway and maybe leave me a comment telling me what you did or didn't like about it, also leave me the name of a story you want me to read.

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12. The Surprise

Lilly's P.O.V

My mom and dad got up and walked over to the couch then told me to sit on the couch in front of them. When I say my mom had put down the sparkly box and teddy bear next to her. " aww that's cute mom did day get it for you?" "no actually its for you" she stated I looked at her confused for a moment "for me?" I questioned her "yes, do you remember this morning when I told you that we had to tell you something?" "yes?" "Well here just open the box it's pretty self explanatory" I grabbed the box from her hand and untied a little pink bow. As the bow sloped to the sides of the box I took off the top. There sat a yellow folder, I thought to myself why my parents would get such a big box for a card. I lifted the card and opened it, it said " Dear Lilly since we could remember you've always begged us to take you to London for your final year of studies you were always too young to go and we didn't want to have to go with you when we didn't have to do now that you have grown up to be a beautiful, independent woman we have bought you a one way ticket to london, england, a flat in Wolverhampton, and enrolled you in a near by school for your last year of studies we will miss you!! Love mommy and daddy" my eyes widened when I read the words London, England I've been dreaming of going there forever and now my dreams have come true by the end of the letter I was in tears I stood up to hug both my parents and thank them for everything I live my parents so much they were the best! When I finally wiped the tears away and sat back down I asked them questions about the trip " when I will be leaving?" I questioned christmas was near and I didn't want to just leave them "well your leaving tomorrow and we know by the look on your face your worried about christmas but don't because your mother and I will be going to your flat to spend christmas so it's sort o like a vacation for us and your early present" I smiled and was excited "go upstairs and start packing your plane leaves at 12:35am " my parents said. Then it hit me wait what?!?!? I'm leaving tomorrow I only have like 3 hours to pack and that's not enough cause I'm going to be packing my whole life I'm gonna live in London 0_0 !!


Author's Note : alright lovely readers if your reading this now thanks so much for waiting so long for this chapter I hope you love it and I hope you have a wonderful christmas I will be posting the next chapter a day or so after Christmas but who knows I might do it one Christmas just cause if and ideal pops in my head I'll just write it then post it do yeah love you all and I know I keep saying this but if you wanna talk about the book or just wish me a Merry Christmad personally kik me @official_mia14_ and if you guys want I'll make a instagram for all my fans or fans of the book Byee :P ...xx~Maria
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